Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The topic raises a controversial issue of whether a society should extrapolates specials skills of children and train them to develop those skills or not. Indisputably, its the responsibility of parents to know the talent of their child and give them special training in an early stage so that later they can achieve excellence in that area. Nevertheless, society also has some responsibility to identifiy extraordinary skills amongst children as they know more about the areas in which a child is taking interest and would later succeed. Thus, a society has a responsibility to praise people at an early stage in their areas of interest so that they can achieve success in life.
First of all, a good society always motivates a child and praise them in various ways to achieve their talents. For instance, a small children amongst a group can become a great footballer like Cristiano Ronaldo if people identifiy their talent and give them training at an early stage. Furthermore, a great Indian cricket star Sachin Tendulkar had started their carrier at the small age of 17. This could only become possible when people recognizes his talent at an early stage and motivates him. If people of society had discarded his efforts and his parents impose their will to him for becoming a doctor or engineer, do you think he could live upto his dreams? Thus, its the society who inspire people to live up their dreams and make them successful.
Although, some society demotivates the children at first and later would appreciate them if they succeed. For example, a great Indian boxer, Vijender Singh has struggled enormously in his life to get a gold for India in boxing. At first, he was abandoned by his family since they were against boxing and later when he won the gold for India, his family and the whole society accepted him and praises him for his effortless fight. A good society would never squander a real talent and would avildy praises them.
Furthermore, there are so may realty shows which applaud talent of children at an early stage. Some kids shows an extreme amount of talent in various fields like singing or dancing. Moreover, these shows train them professionally and shape their talents. Afterwards, these special talents are admired and praised by people of the society.
In conclusion, although a society should not only identifies the talent of a child at an early, but should also inspire them to achieve success in that particular area. A good society would never belittle special talents but would rather inspire them so that they can achieve success in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'extrapolate'
Suggestion: extrapolate
...rsial issue of whether a society should extrapolates specials skills of children and train t...
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Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...elop those skills or not. Indisputably, its the responsibility of parents to know t...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'child'?
Suggestion: child
...ve their talents. For instance, a small children amongst a group can become a great foot...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nk he could live upto his dreams? Thus, its the society who inspire people to live ...
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Message: You should probably use 'show'.
Suggestion: show
...f children at an early stage. Some kids shows an extreme amount of talent in various ...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires base form of the verb: 'identify'
Suggestion: identify
...ion, although a society should not only identifies the talent of a child at an early, but ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93835616438 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60346561215 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440639269406 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6876824113 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.15 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317606981139 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108067254332 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460876604858 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185185234915 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449886642749 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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