True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The topic raises a controversial issue of whether actual success can be measured in terms of the target and goals one sets for himself or not. Indisputably, many people think that rich people are successful since they have everything they should possess. Nevertheless, money is not the only target which people would like to set for themselves. Rather, different people have different definition for happiness and if they are living their lives happily that means they got success in life. Thus, true success can be measured in terms of various factors irrespective of only the goals one sets for oneself.
First of all, many people has a goal or dream to achieve something in life. Some people want to earn a lot of money in their lives while other people would like to do something else. The definition of success varies from people to people. For instance, many poor people would like to earn money and would never think of anything else since they have wasted their lives in poverty. Furthermore, many businesman who has a lot of money but donot have peace since they're always roaming around the headache of stock market. Moreover, many people would like to travel the world, various places like the beauty of Europe, the culture of Japan, the ancient forts and places in India etc, and that is the only dream they have. Therefore, everyone has different types of goals apart from getting money and success in their lives and hence, getting success is not only measured in terms of goals on sets for oneself rather by fulfilling their dreams their actual success can be measured.
Furthermore, many people sets a single goal in their life and work very hard to achieve that goal. Its their determination and will power which lead them success by pursuing those goals. For instance, many people working in an army or millitary forces had worked hard in thier lives to get this position. Additionally, some players like Cristiano Ronaldo, a football player from Portugal, would only think of playing football from childhood and has achieved success by becoming an awesome football player of the current generation. Hence, a can have a single target and could spent whole life in pursuing those targets or a they can have multiple targets or rather they're are capricious about their dreams and would never get satisfied with anything. Therefore, success could not be measured only in terms of goals rather it depends on people and person that what they want to ultimately pursue in their lives.
Finally, many people doesn't achieved the target which they sets in their life and still live peacefully and happily. Are they not successful people? Well, we cannot really say that. Afterall, life is full of mysteries which no one can predict. Hence, it depends on them whether they think that they have achieved success or whether they want to work hard to achieve that.
In conclusion, although for some people, success can be measured primarily in terms of goals and targets which one sets for oneself, different people would think of success in different terms. Hence, it fully depends on people about what definition of success they're following.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...lot of money but donot have peace since theyre always roaming around the headache of s...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...nd work very hard to achieve that goal. Its their determination and will power whic...
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Line 5, column 577, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...e, a can have a single target and could spent whole life in pursuing those targets or...
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Line 5, column 623, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'they'?
Suggestion: a; they
...whole life in pursuing those targets or a they can have multiple targets or rather the...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...hey can have multiple targets or rather theyre are capricious about their dreams and w...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...in their lives. Finally, many people doesnt achieved the target which they sets in ...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'set'
Suggestion: set
...e doesnt achieved the target which they sets in their life and still live peacefully...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: AFTERALL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: After all
...eople? Well, we cannot really say that. Afterall, life is full of mysteries which no one...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...people about what definition of success theyre following.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2628.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93984962406 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39111339283 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402255639098 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 796.5 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7922347725 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.12 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.28 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190841641655 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764886081191 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886747289573 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155871571663 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803289800451 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.