In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The topic raises a controversial issue of whether in such an era of media coverage, can we consider any man or woman as a hero or not? Indisputably, most of the media channels are busy in making the news as effective as possible without even looking whether they are actually correct or not. Nevertheless, media is the only source which shows various achievement of small people from small town so that people would learn from them. Thus, in such cases these small people would become hero to many other people.
First of all, media is a very effective channel for showing the things which are happening around us. Most of the media exaggerates the news so that people could interestingly take a look at their channel irrespective of thinking whether they're correct or not. They have the capability of make anyone as hero and anyone as villain. For example, a famous superstar of India, Sanjay Dutt, have been kept in prison for 5 years for a charge of terrorism and later after investigation, they found that he's not guilty. Thus, all the news shown by the media is not actually correct, hence people should think at once without considering that news.
Secondly, media can change the feeling of people about a person and make them hero. For instance, a recent movie on autobiography Milkha Singh, a great Indian athlete, shows the profuse struggle which he has done to achieve a huge success and get the gold medals for India in mid 19s. Furthermore, the autobiography on Abrahim Lincon has changed many people's mind and made him a hero in the eyes of many people even after his involvement in fiercest war America has ever fought. Therefore, media intensifies the emotions of people by exaggerating the news so that people could be considered as hero.
At last, people now a days don't have a modicum of time to judge people based on their work which they're doing. They can only get some time to look for the news and make a judgement out of it. For instance, various detective shows like Sherlok Homes negates thoughts of people so that a person can become suspicious about their honest worker working in their house for a long time. Moreover, various news channels shows the achievement of small town people like a person saves someone from dipping into the deep lake etc., reverse the emotion of people and make that persona hero. Thus, its fully depends on the news or channels which people are referring in order to judge a people.
In conclusion, although media exaggerates most of the news, they can change the image of people and make them hero or vice versa. It actually depends on the sources which people are referring since some many sources produce fake news so as to entertain the people. Thus, media have the capability to make someone a hero so that people can exemplify them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 489.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74028629857 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47737492347 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470347648262 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 737.1 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3089131285 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.380952381 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137586901528 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532166265502 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345044110863 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945807056214 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213656508297 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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