It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
these days, media coverage has become more intensive than the past. because of this, many experts argue that it is not possible today for a society to deem any living man and woman as a hero. I agree with this view because intensive media coverage plays a role in making people know about many issues.
Admittedly, it was possible for society to view an individual as a hero in the past. this is because average citizens were not accessible to the media due to a lack of the influence of media coverage. Thus, people used to believe and follow a few people who had new theories or new thinking. For example, only a few people made an objection of the slavery when slavery was prevalent in american society. In particular, Abraham Lincoln pronounced that Confederate states’ slavery should be abolished by Emancipation Proclamation, and many people agreed with his opinion and followed his idea. Moreover, he has been considered as an eminent president in american history so far. Also, many leaders are being described as heroes in the present days. therefore, in the past when there was no powerful influence of the media, many leaders could be viewed as role-models.
On the other hand, having heroes nowadays is not possible because the media closely reports newly-discovered issues about leaders and celebrities. For example, many people considered Tiger Woods as a hero in golf area because he won many international golf competitions and showed people noticeable outcomes in many game. however, when the media reported coverage about his scandal regarding dating several women, he lost all great reputation that he has built up so far. As a result, compared to the past, the media these days scrutinizes in more detail about leaders and even celebrities. therefore, many people do not consider these leaders and celebrities when they find some flawed private life by the intensive media coverage.
In conclusion, in the past when the media coverage was not powerful, it was easy for some leaders to be deemed as a hero. however, media coverage has been more intensive about leaders. therefore, when people figure out the leader’s faults by the intensive media coverage, they no longer consider the leaders as role-model.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08648648649 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7653601839 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502702702703 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6642782756 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0526315789 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999197402336 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402324319601 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519182504343 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769195631779 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036238871575 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.