To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
many experts believe that major cities in countries reflect characteristics of a society, so they argue that one must examine major cities to comprehend the most pivotal characteristics of a society. however, I believe that studying major cities is not essential to understand the most important characteristics of a society.
Admittedly, in few cases, people should analyze its major cities in order to grasp the most important characteristics of a society because they are a metropolitan area where a plethora of citizens are residing. For example, paris, city and capital of france, is a major city in france where over two million of citizens are residing. Thus, there are opportunities for meet people’s needs in various areas such as business, commerce, study and entertainment. In addition, paris has many important cultural institutions such as Louvre museum and Eiffel Tower. As a result, if people analyze paris, they can understand the most important characteristics of the society like people and culture. therefore, compared to rural areas, major cities may reflect a society more effectively.
however, in many cases, rural areas should be analyzed to understand the most significant factors of society because major cities are more globalized than rural areas. For example, in order to understand a society in brazil, rural areas such as amazon forest should be examined, not major cities like San Paulo. this is because the cities have become so globalized that it is hard to show the overall and unique characteristics of a society. instead, taking a look into rural areas like amazon rainforest would help grasp the important aspects of brazil. this is due to the fact that this rural area consists of indigenous tribes, a wide range of dialects, as well as various plants and animals. As a result, these rural areas are not influenced by the outside world and are protected by the government. therefore, there is strong reason to believe that rural areas should be studied for understand unique and important element of a society instead of major cities.
In conclusion, although major cities can be studied to comprehend the pivotal aspects of a society, analyzing rural areas is a better way to understand society because major cities are too globalized to reflect the unique and important characteristics of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25132275132 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99351804801 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415343915344 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9513191547 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0625 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 5.21951772744 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463394170938 0.243740707755 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171115907393 0.0831039109588 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157610908448 0.0758088955206 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365742416453 0.150359130593 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162632508747 0.0667264976115 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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