Cheddar is “THE American” cheese, where Americans consumes the most, and more than any other country in the world. By streamlining products into one domestic cheese, the store can improve margins. In the given memo, the president of a US based chain of cheese stores recommends that they should stock domestic cheese only and discontinue stocking imported cheese. The president claims that this would lead to reduction of expenses due to the limitation on inventory. The argument is supported by the fact that the five best-selling cheeses in the past year at their newest stores were domestic cheeses. Moreover, a recent survey conducted by Cheese of the World magazine has indicated an increasing trend of consumption of domestic cheeses among its subscribers. A closer analysis of the argument reveals that it suffers from several logical fallacies.
America is the number one consumer of cheese in the world, and cheddar is the champion among all. Importing cheese from foreign countries, is highly risky in many sense. First, the custom and foreign policy greatly affect foreign sourcing. Dairy industry is the most heavily subsidized products in our dearest trade partners, Mexican, Canadian and EU creamery all backed by their big G. Current trade war, a continuations of tariff since the 1930s, is like hurricanes coming every summer in south Florida. You know they will come, but no idea when, and how often. By ditching un-American products, our store can truly become safe again.
American patriotism rules supreme from coast to coast, everlasting, ever-expanding. The first gun shot from Wisconsin now gives our finest cheese. We the Americans can truly be proud. Those selling un-American, inferior cheese store should be punished for their treacherous crimes. In this online age, anyone clicks on the bait, and no better name than “Cheeses of the World.” It promotes American value, and freedom. You see the star and stripes fly on July’s day, so bright blue and red, remembered in every summer’s home.
American consumerism maybe overwhelming, largest stores with largest variety, so people will come and shop. But cheese is a very perishable good, inventory and storage fee is high. On average, at the heat and moisture of a grocery store, a cheese can last a month. By eliminating alien cheese, domestic cheese will bring down various cost, including storage, re-stocking, refrigerant and shelf space renting.
Given the limited information, it in our company’s best interest to start import substitution, under the more triumphant American ideals. Those crying wolf knows so little about the rich American cheese history and international trade relationship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sense seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much sense', 'a good deal of sense'.
Suggestion: much sense; a good deal of sense
...m foreign countries, is highly risky in many sense. First, the custom and foreign policy g...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a continuation' or simply 'continuations'?
Suggestion: a continuation; continuations
...cked by their big G. Current trade war, a continuations of tariff since the 1930s, is like hurr...
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Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the largest'.
Suggestion: , the largest
... American consumerism maybe overwhelming, largest stores with largest variety, so people ...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the largest'.
Suggestion: with the largest
...rism maybe overwhelming, largest stores with largest variety, so people will come and shop. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40375586854 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85312005239 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631455399061 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7999684885 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5384615385 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.65384615385 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240374457916 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586347742314 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555217664718 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122389432124 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583256079042 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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