Government must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive because it is primarily in cities that a nation s cultural traditions are preserved and generated

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Government must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation’s cultural traditions are preserved and generated.

Cultural traditions are the identity of the nation and there is no doubt that we should protect our cultural traditions in order to protect our identity. The major cities are the limelight of the nation where majority of the people are gathered in order to live a better life and so it is acceptable that government should allocate more fund to the cities in order to thrive. But, as the fund is primarily concerned with the preservation and the generation of the cultural tradition, I completely disagree with the assertion as cities are not the right place where cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
Major cities are the limelight of the nation where majority of the people come to reside in the hope of living a better and comfort life. In the context of underdeveloped Asian countries like Nepal, Bhutan, India, Bangladesh and so forth, majority of the people residing in the cities are out-of-towners, and they live in the city area in the hope of getting quality education, better job, better health care, business and other facilities. Since, majority of these people are primarily concerned with their job and business and spend most of their time thinking about their career, they do not have time for the preservation and generation of the cultural tradition. Thus, I believe that funding in metropolises for the sake of preserving culture is redundant.
Similarly, the youngsters living in the city area are mostly apathetic towards cultural tradition. They are unaware about the nation’s traditional dance, traditional songs, traditional dress, customs, arts and literature. These modern young people are rather inclined towards internet online social programs and playing online games. Further, these young people are highly fascinated towards western culture such as western dress, western songs, dance, and even tattooing, piercing body parts, listening vulgar music etc. In these scenarios, we cannot expect that city people will devote their time in the preservation and generation of the nation’s culture and traditions. Therefore, I personally believe that cities are not the right place where culture is generated and preserved.
Although, village and countryside of the nation are sparsely populated and poorly developed, people living in the village are conscious about their culture and traditions and they always make effort in preserving them. For instance, during the marriage ceremonies, rice feeding ceremonies and other cultural ceremonies, people of the village follows their cultural traditions that are inherited to them by their forefathers, and so these people always celebrate these special occasions by playing cultural songs and music in cultural dress. While, in the case of city people, marriage is done in court in the presence of no more than a couple of people. Further, in the case of countryside life, all people celebrate their festivals by spending their happy moments with their relatives, talking about their life moments, playing traditional music, wearing traditional dress and taking traditional food. Whereas in the case of city people, they usually spend their festival time either by playing cards, gambling and drinking, if they remain in the city. Majority of the people living in the city area returns to their home village during some special occasion or festivals also proves that city is not the right place where culture is preserved. It is the village area where culture is generated and preserved.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the claim that government should make adequate financial support to the city in order to preserve nation’s cultural tradition. I believe that it is always the countryside where cultural traditions are generated and preserved, and so in my opinion government should endow adequate fund to the village if it really wants to preserve nation’s cultural traditions.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, similarly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, talking about, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3278.0 2235.4752809 147% => OK
No of words: 614.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33876221498 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.977853291 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74252013171 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.384364820847 0.4932671777 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1048.5 704.065955056 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4999846954 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419722953205 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145622415765 0.0831039109588 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731274160751 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278665836146 0.150359130593 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547377725161 0.0667264976115 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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