"Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated."
The author has two concern in his claim above. First is, ensuring financial support in major cities in order to develop. The second one is, To be developed as a nation, developing Cultural sectors must be the primary concern of a Gov. I disagree with the authors claims.
Firstly, Cultural traditions is not admittedly, one of the primary sectors that ensures the livelihood, security, education of the citizen of a nation. Let’s talk about a whole nation first. A nation’s development depends mostly on economic and educational progress in the first hand. Without strong economic base no govt can maintain national affairs let alone international ones. A nation to thrive the basic needs of citizen such as home, adequate food,treatment,education first have to be fulfilled in every cities of a country as a nation’s development depends on the betterment of every cities country.
Secondly, Development of a country depends on the development of both large and small cities. It should be completely out of concern that whether the large cities are met with financial support or not. Each city should be supported adequately in order to thrive.
The third point is, The cultural tradions, traditional arts, musics are evolved mostly in rural areas of a country. Lets give an example of Bangladeshi cultural traditions. Old folk songs, one of the finest assests of cultural traditons of this country,were created by bauls, dervishes of rural areas. Its totally irrational of the author to say that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated in cities.
Finally, To make a country culturally enriched private organizations should work. The cultural traditions should be matter of concern of private organizations .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 276.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3152173913 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10310596657 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7700917032 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38888888889 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29190052009 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914442424647 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898466510665 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148778132489 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437489304309 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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