Governments officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve

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Governments officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.

A nation's success and development mostly depend on its people who serve the country. Among them Government officials play the most important role for serving his or her country from various perspectives. They have the power to ensure both a better country or corrupted country. Therefore, I mostly agree with the statement that a government's officials should have a judgmental skill for serving his job rather than just carrying out the orders from the people for the following two reasons.

Firstly, the Government may take false actions for their own profit and they order the government officials accordingly to fulfill their fallacious actions. For instance, if any high class persons or relatives are related with any crime, it is often ordered from governments not to take actions or to just fake the total crime scene and thus the perpetrators always get support from the back. Eventually, the total systems of a nation will collapse. But , if the government officials just use their judgement and expose the criminal, it will ultimately reduce the crimes in the country. In the same way, all the cases of corruption of a country can be mitigated if government officials have the power to use their rational thinking.

Secondly,the government officials use the property of governments, take advantage of being government officials and take rapacious steps which go against the country's betterment. For instance, the police officer of Minnesota,Minneapolis , has used his power of being a police officer for expressing anger against a black and eventually killed the person. Moreover, sometimes, government officials use the property of the government without thinking about the moral value. On the contrary, if these officials relied his judgement and morale, they might have handled the issue more modestly and that will lead the country to achieve more success.

But it is true that government officials will be severely chastised and even lose their job due to not obeying orders meticulously. They don’t have much power to use their shrewdness without orders from the governments. They often have to act like a doll.

So to conclude, if the government officials have the opportunity to judge an action and work accordingly, this will mostly reduce the effect of being rigidly following the government, and alleviate the crimes and corruptions from rudimentary levels.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, it is true, on the contrary, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29736842105 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9168612494 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515789473684 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0846557051 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.411764706 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333545641501 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107491457673 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734813827337 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173524064066 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641529590304 0.0667264976115 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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