This was an idea followed by many governments of the world and it led us to many problems that threaten the existance of our species and life in the planet therefore the government should always focus on anticipated problems of future.
Many of the problems that we face today is the result of our governments finding solutions to immediate problems rather than trying to solve anticipated problems.One such problem was the uncontrolled uses of resources.Men when they left their lives as nomads they preffered settlements.An immediate problem they faced was the land they needed to bulit their houses.Its solution was deforestation, consequences of which are faced by us, their posterity.Forest were cut down in an uncontrolled rate, which resulted in the extinction of several animal and plant species and led some species to the endangered category.Deforestation is just one of the example.There are several other examples, Uncontrolled mining, which subsequently led to landslides and flood; Dams which caused large regions of forest to be submerged in water, and the places where they are situated more prone to earthquakes; Nuclear power plants, whose unplanned waste disposal resulted in genetic deformations in future generations; uncontrolled uses of pesticides which is ascribed to be a major reason for the increase of cancer patients.The list goes on.All these problems are a result of finding solutions to immediate problems without anticipating problems it could lead to in the future.
Sometimes we might think that in the long run we are all dead and we only need to think of our immediate problems.Consider the time when petroleum products were cheap.It helped many industries flourish, but where did it lead us to, Global warming.It is one of the major problems faced in the present world.Had we thought about the long term consequences of these uncontrolled usage, we might have not been in this situation.The climate changes which are threatening the very survival of our species would not have occurred.
We have a responsibility to our future generations and hence we should anticipate problems which could arise from our actions.Hence the government should anticpate problems of future and there possible solutions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37110481586 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24897933992 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521246458924 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 88.0 23.0359550562 382% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 424.728957689 60.3974514979 703% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 474.0 118.986275619 398% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 88.25 23.4991977007 376% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258037997592 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163078882556 0.0831039109588 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704722336526 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163078882556 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704722336526 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.0 14.1392134831 339% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -26.3 48.8420337079 -54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 12.1743820225 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.05 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.85 8.38706741573 141% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.2 11.2143820225 332% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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