Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain y

There are so many kinds of affairs that the Government confronts everyday while we should not abuse any troubles that need to be sovlved no matter how emergent it is or not. I believe the Government shoule balcance everything and sort them in order, then make particular mearsures to practice, because the authority must grasp both the future and the present, this is also an ordeal to testify the ablity of the Government which need to take a meticulous consideration between the importance and emergency.

To begin with, the government should resovle the exigent promblems immediately. In 2008, the year of Beijing Olympic Games was held in August, China suffered the most violent earthquake in May, which took more than 100000 people's lives and the worst destruction. While in this year, the big disaster did not stop the governments' pace for holding the Olympic Games simultaneously. With the proper and effective arragement by the Chinese overnment , China reduced the lost at best and held an sucessful sports meeting for the humans. As we concern the government must deal with the disaster and prenvent more destruction at first place, as Chinese government did, in that the people are all protected by the country.

Another prospect is the implements of the future taken by the Government are equally essenttial for the nation. People can't live in the Mars right now, because we cannot get the technoloy adopt to our dream, so the government should take plans to make it come true. Because we not living in the Mars don't on behalf of that is not of immigrant option forever as the development of the human-beings, Growing population will be a big problem in the future and we should take it grant carefully while not just wait for that day's coming. What's more ,like the other discoveries of human invetions, the scientific research of living in the Mars will benefit the whole human. Thomas Edison, the proeminent scientist , on the way to invent light bulbs, he failed hundreds of times,however, he invented lots of useful equiments for people during the lost.Likewise, the discovery of the living-in-the-Mars will surprise us by the scientific research.

The government should consider the exigent and future affairs as a whole because they both will make a geat influence to the people as I disscuss above. On this ocassion,the government should make a carefull plan to arrange now and future.

In conclusion , I think the government should solve both o the problems with a wise consideration and pace.

Votes
Average: 7.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
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Suggestion: ,
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...China reduced the lost at best and held an sucessful sports meeting for the humans...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...ow, because we cannot get the technoloy adopt to our dream, so the government should tak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, then, while, i think, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0214797136 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85380476079 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53937947494 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1091212959 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.266666667 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9333333333 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140309823685 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551242984716 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524055582848 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101834919545 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631778594063 0.0667264976115 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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