Governments serve people, and they must guarantee welfare of citizens as much as possible. Whether the immediate problems of today and the expected problems of the future are addressed is the best manifestation of government serving people. Therefore, both of these issues are considered as the indispensable perimeters to determine effectiveness of governments. That is to say, governments should focus on solving immediate and future problems.
Speaking of the immediate problems of today, it reminds people of unemployment, pollution, and terrorism. These issues must be emphasized and tackled by government. If they ignore them, citizens will be discontent to governments because they are unsafe physically and mentally and then governments would suffer to be overthrown or strongly resisted. Unemployment is one of the most perilous problems government should focus considering it closely relates to stability of people’s basic lives. everyone needs work to raise their own and their families. Imagine the rate of unemployment is twenty or even thirty percent in a country, the conceivable consequence is stagnation of national economy and citizens’ rebellion. The most vivid example is Franklin D. Roosevelt’s New Deal which addressed the serious issue of the Great Depression. Unemployment disappeared and economy restored. Pollution is another tough issue government should highlight. Only when there are good air quality and clean water can people’s health be protected. China is experiencing bad air quality caused by rocketing economic development. Smog is threating the health of every citizen. Government should ponder effective ways to minimize pollution at the cost of money and jobs. Nobody wants to see the tragedy of London in the first Industrial Revolution with calamity of millions of casualties triggered by metal processing and fuel abuse.
In addition, looking at terrorism, governments cannot choose to ignore but face it. the occurrences of these issues threat the safety of citizens and nation, and the successfully solving them can build trustworthiness and confidence of government. The 2013 Boston Marathon Bombing is deliberately planned by terrorists lived in Boston. Government assigned FBI to investigate the perpetrators and medical assistance teams to save the lives of innocent audiences in bombing spots. The efficiency of governmental investigation and the timely considerable medical treatment enabled government to be praised by people.
However, talking about the anticipated problem in the future, most people remind aging problem. Although it does not damage a city or a nation at once, someday it disastrously destroys competitiveness and power of a nation altogether. The more aging people a nation has, the less labors there will be. In the aftermath, economic meltdown would be the destination. Therefore, government should be concerned about this anticipated problem. Japan is the typical country with the highest ratio of aging people all over the world. During these years, Japanese government has carried out plans to reward bearing and has uplifted medical service for pediatrics. With the help of governmental investment and bonus incentive, the rate of fertility is increasing, meaning that aging issue are slowly but efficiently being changed.
To conclude it, government should bear the responsibility of caring about the immediate issues including terrorism, pollution, and unemployment and the expected problems such as aging problem. Juxtaposed with short and long-term problems, government will better serve people with acuteness and accuracy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 392, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...nemployment is one of the most perilous problems government should focus considering it ...
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Line 4, column 499, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everyone
...stability of people's basic lives. everyone needs work to raise their own and their...
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Line 8, column 82, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[1]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to age'.
Suggestion: to age
...oblem in the future, most people remind aging problem. Although it does not damage a ...
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Line 8, column 276, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun labors is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...The more aging people a nation has, the less labors there will be. In the aftermath,...
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Line 10, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rve people with acuteness and accuracy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, in addition, speaking of, such as, talking about, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3101.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 540.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74259259259 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1769375346 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 964.8 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7263866673 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2058823529 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209015204248 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504450523782 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655997370072 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130363672961 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513685631496 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 100.480337079 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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