Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Mumbai is the capital city of delhi. Some call it city of "dreams" whereas other called it city of "bollywood". There is an ultra-development done by the local government; Skyline full of sky-scrappers at the side of the beach, Sea-link bridge and paved foot-over walking alley that connected different parts of city, to enhance its beautification. Yet, there are several primary problems that this modern city suffers from, much of its due to negligence of local government. Therefore, I agree with the author's view that Government focus should be on solving present immediate problems more than brainstorming for the future.
First reason for my view is that government overlooked the sanitization facilities in mumbai. While roaming around the chief streets full of beautiful houses of film-stars and big businessman, everything seems in its place but, once move towards the lower-income area, the sight of water burst, savage draining on the road, non-cemented pavements as well as practices like manual scavenging will seems to appear on common sight. Capital cities like Delhi and Mumbai take a good portion of annual country Budget. Despite that, money is never implemented on these common day-today problem. Rather, the anticipation of building more world-class facilities like more Children amusement part, which is already present in the city, and artificial beach island is promoted and a huge sum from the budget is kept aside for implementation. Due to these sanitations issue many people suffer from bad health and even death as the gases from the savage system produce harmful fumes. Therefore, rather then building projects for future, they should take a concern to the present issues and act accordingly.
Second reason for my view is depreciation of Government pension to the government employees. For instance, last year there was an issue about the short of pension for the existing government workers. Situation got worsen and government judge stopped these pension plans indefinitely. These are low-income category people who does not have enough fund to live on their own once they are not able to work due to their aging health issues. On the other hand, government put most of their fund on building metrorail for the city. Mumbai already has an existing network of local trains which works just fine for the commutation yet, governemnt anticipation on the problem of high population in next 10 years made them possible to implement on the metrorail project. Hence, government being irresponsible and unconcern about the income category in Mumbai.
However, it is important to anticipate the future problems and take actions regarding that as city is always moving fast towards its growth with increase in population of immigrants but they should also see the problems that face by the city population before their future plans.
In conclusion, due to the reasons states above, government should definitely look for solving the present issues and then take an concern about their future plans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...roduce harmful fumes. Therefore, rather then building projects for future, they shou...
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...plement on the metrorail project. Hence, government being irresponsible and uncon...
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...n about the income category in Mumbai. However, it is important to anticipate t...
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...olving the present issues and then take an concern about their future plans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2571.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32298136646 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9446729763 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554865424431 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9646355243 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.21951772744 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167982466549 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504891155478 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698830326157 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952693187546 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212754498167 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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