In recent times, publicity through movies or short films has emerged increasingly due to the rise in technology and social media. It is easier for people to comprehend a movies than to read a piece of information but creation of a even a short clip of few minutes requires a lot of work. It should be made sure that the movie is engaging and impactive. Experienced filmmakers could be the safest option for the government to create publicity messages through movies or clips.
Creation of one movie requires time, resources and economy. An established filmmaker with experience would know what would strike majority of people and generate maximum awareness. An already existing fan base would ensure that the message wouldn't go unnoticed.
An experienced filmmaker would have a real time experience of how movies work,? What gets maximum attention span? How to generate a thought provocation rather than simply delivering a message? In the era where social media and internet is available at each finger tips - such movies prove to be a boon for society.
Today when social media is so liberal, misinformation is a major issue. A movie or clips by government based on authentic facts and reality of life could help us in fighting against it. To sum it up, there is denying to the fact that movies could prove as the best medium to reach each eye. Filmmakers could focus on social movies with the help of government or encouragement by government to ensure a positive use of such potential medium.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a movie' or simply 'movies'?
Suggestion: a movie; movies
.... It is easier for people to comprehend a movies than to read a piece of information but...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a piece of information but creation of a even a short clip of few minutes requir...
^
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...An established filmmaker with experience would know what would strike majority of...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... fan base would ensure that the message wouldnt go unnoticed. An experienced filmm...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that the message wouldnt go unnoticed. An experienced filmmaker would have a re...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the message wouldnt go unnoticed. An experienced filmmaker would have a real...
^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ?
... real time experience of how movies work,? What gets maximum attention span? How t...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ighting against it. To sum it up, there is denying to the fact that movies could prove as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93307086614 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75888415001 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.299983803 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5333333333 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 5.21951772744 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16480452677 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544851872007 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672086357694 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939778647723 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484537528591 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a movie' or simply 'movies'?
Suggestion: a movie; movies
.... It is easier for people to comprehend a movies than to read a piece of information but...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a piece of information but creation of a even a short clip of few minutes requir...
^
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...An established filmmaker with experience would know what would strike majority of...
^^
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... fan base would ensure that the message wouldnt go unnoticed. An experienced filmm...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that the message wouldnt go unnoticed. An experienced filmmaker would have a re...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the message wouldnt go unnoticed. An experienced filmmaker would have a real...
^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ?
... real time experience of how movies work,? What gets maximum attention span? How t...
^^
Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ighting against it. To sum it up, there is denying to the fact that movies could prove as ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93307086614 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75888415001 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.299983803 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5333333333 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 5.21951772744 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16480452677 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544851872007 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672086357694 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939778647723 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484537528591 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.