Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Art and culture are the important parts of a nationality with a myriad of aspects. Again, Sovereignty and defense system are the basic parts of a nation which are inevitably necessary. Though arts should be properly patronized by government, but at the same time it is not as emergency as for military sector.
As a threshold matter, government is solely responsible for the security and protection of people. Military sector plays most important role with this regard. On the other hand, it is not solely responsibility of government to the development of arts, rather the arts is more taken care of by the community and by the society as well.
Moreover, Military should be given most of the attention by the government as there are huge activities regarding soldier selection, training, ranking positions of the soldier and so forth. Every activities in military should be done properly and strength of the defensive mechanism of military mostly depend on how actively and scrupulously these activities are done. If one step loses the proper attention, the whole military system can be weaken.
Arts are inevitably an important part of nation, true to say. But if this sector happens to solely depend on the investment of government, then there is a possibility of inhibition of the practice of the arts and culture. For instance, Arts and humanity sector solely take care of the cultural, literature, song , dance form, there historical views and values and so forth which can not be developed only with the help of the investment of government. Furthermore, if this sector gets depending on the government investigation, there is a chance also for government to take propagandistic steps. There may not be freedom of thinking or freedom of practicing if government is willing to put a limitation of the practice of culture by reining in the financial control of arts.
Though investment should be also granted on the arts sector for the development, it is not mandatory to invest similarly as for military as arts are for expressing the uniqueness of a nation, but military are for protecting it's sovereignty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e care of the cultural, literature, song , dance form, there historical views and ...
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Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
...nvestment should be also granted on the arts sector for the development, it is not m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, then, well, as for, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07428571429 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00565884853 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471428571429 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6338728638 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189086241701 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674606173857 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445613428724 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112851325291 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372340637539 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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