A nation should require all the students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
The speaker proposed that there should be one curriculum for all the students of a nation before entering the college life. I mostly agree with this assertion.
Same national curriculum denotes that there should be the same syllabus and study materials for all the students throughout the country. Every student must have a basic and fundamental knowledge and skill. To ensure that, there should have the same syllabus under which every student receive basic knowledge like mathematics, grammar, science, history etc.
Before going to college, all students must have basic knowledge, whether he or she wants to take particularly one subject as major. Suppose, a student wants to study whether in medicine or engineering or social science, he/she must have some basic and common knowledge of basic science, mathematics, history etc. Same national curriculum will ensure that before going to college, every student have these basic ideas and the college will be certain that all students already have the prerequisite knowledge before proceeding to more
specialized subject.
Through the same curriculum system, the navigation of the assessment and evaluation of the students will be much easier. All the students will come under the same standard of evaluation. So there will be the same competition among all the students of whole countries from all region and from all background.
Though there are some good aspects of the same curriculum, there are also some questions to answer. The first question is, who take the responsibility to set a standard curriculum? are the syllabus under this curriculum is enough efficient to fulfil basic knowledge? Can social communities know the curriculum and make a contribution to set the syllabus for the betterment of there offspring? Are there any special opportunities for disabled students?
The same curriculum activities throughout the nations will bring definitely positive feedbacks if those constraints above are taken into consideration and set a syllabus as efficient as possible for all the students before going to college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44923076923 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82853758187 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.4863335892 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.176470588 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41176470588 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355749295828 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129283653183 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115674197624 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184645254053 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100195862246 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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