Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
A country has many aspects. It has a cultural side as well as a political side. The government of a country has to allocate its budget to various sectors. When allocating, priority is a concern here. Not every sector gets the same allowance because there are levels in the prioritization. The prompt suggests that arts sector should receive as much investment as the military sector. Well, this is not a plausible expectation at all. And here is why.
To begin, the military system of a country defines the schemes or plans that it takes to keep the people of the country safe either from any domestic unrest to any international attack. The military is a very important and crucial part of a country. The stronger the military, the better the protection the people of that country gets. Now, if someone wants to make a robust military squad, they need to invest in this sector. They would have to buy high-tech training gears, train the officers, build facilities equipped with everything they need. So, this would require a great deal of money. On the other hand, arts is a pure form of mental development. It can influence peoples' minds, but when it comes to saving the country-people from any danger befalling on them, arts does not prove to be an effective equipment. So, first it has to be ensured that the people are safe, only then they can pursue their love of art. So, it proves that military sector is more likely to be prioritized before arts.
Further, let's talk about what happens when a natural disaster or calamity occurs. Whenever such things happen, we find the military working day and night to get the situation under control. For example, if an earthquake or tsunami or flood takes place, we see uniformed officials at the site providing relief and accommodation to the people in need. They serve the people beyond imagination and that is what they are taught to do. In such situation, arts does not provide us much value. So, critical conditions like this well define the distinction between military and arts.
However, one can argue about the cultural aspects of one's country. They might say that, a country can have its distinct identification based on its arts form. True, but when can people give their attention to arts? When they have minimal fear of getting attacked and are not afraid of how the next morning is going to turn out for them. For example, people in the war-clad countries like Syria or Yemen are fighting for their lives. Their main objective there is to survive first. They do not have the luxury to think about this sort of stuff. So, this illustrates that the safety is the first thing anyone wants and certainly a good military squad can help in achieving it.
In conclusion, the distinction between the hierarchy of military and arts is very visible. We need arts to preserve our culture sure, but in no way it can surpass the military, either in importance or in investment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2436.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 510.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77647058824 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56165495814 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527450980392 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5585356293 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6470588235 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23132580263 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494471043284 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064812343229 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120892374729 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142851864346 0.0667264976115 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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