Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
A Country's economy is dependent on various entities: Art, technology, business. Just as the military is necessary for the security of the country, art is equally important to the country for the below reasons.
Firstly, Art can have a tremendous effect on country's economy. It can serve as bread and butter to the country. Art can earn a large amount on the fund, which can eventually be used for military resources. In other words, It can be sum up as an investment in art is directly proportional to the investment in the military. For instance, recently India has acquired a hundred fighter plane which required huge amount of funds. The military funds weren't sufficient to buy such a large amount of plane. At this time government provided funds to the military from the profit earned by the concert of singer Arjit Singh. If government invest equally in art, that would somehow will be profitable to the country's glory directly or indirectly.
Secondly, The art like music, dance, movie, theatre flaunts the country talents. It enhances the country glory among different countries. Just as military show case the country's power, similarly the art shows the nation's talent. For example, USA is considered as the developed and financially stable nation as it has plethora of military power as well as the art.Further, the recent movie has great importance world wide. Example, Hollywood movies seen all around the world add a lot to country's economy. Thus, if art is supported by the government, it will never cease to earn funds.
Furthermore, In many countries, since childhood school gives equal importance to art and sports. The sports activities involve physical development of the student which can help in future to enrol in military. In many school it is mandatory to select one minor in sport and one in art. Thus, as school understands that art and military are equally important, it should also be treated equally in every aspect.
In conclusion, If the government provides equal funds to art and military, definitely country will grow economically and in strength as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03458213256 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75094349684 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536023054755 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1364720289 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.1904761905 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5238095238 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47619047619 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244300406175 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733207211682 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526243789859 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132937453553 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349419323771 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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