Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military

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Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military

Arts have an ineffable connection with the culture and diversity of a nation. Therefore, preserving art is essential for preserving culture, hence government should indeed invest in art and military tantamount. Investment in the military is necessary for obviously embracing a nation to cope with imminent attacks but a focus on protecting culture is crucial for a nation to thrive and retain its originality.

North Korea is an exemplar in military advancements, which signifies the cornucopia of investment made in the military, but the culture has heavily suffered due to Kim Jong un's ideology of warfare. People of North Korea suffer from the autocracy of their leader dominating everything from the haircut of its male citizens to deciding the occupations. North Korea even suffers from a dearth of basic necessities. If the government doesn't spend equally in arts and military the preparedness of a country in terms of war is in vain as there would be no culture or soul of the country to protect. Hence, protecting ancient art forms and culture is a job which if not supported by the govenrment is bound to perish.

Italy is one of the highest ranked country in terms of preserving art and culture, which depicts the investments and measures taken by the Italian government. From the Baroque architectures in Rome to the renaissance arts, everything Italy stands for, defines the people of Italy. For the military, Italy manages to put in tantamount investments which places them among the countries with top militia power. Hence, Italian manage to preserve their vast culture as well as protect it from attacks. Therefore, maintiaining a balance between investment is indespensible for a country to thrive culturally and powerfully.

India has one of the most diverse culture with more than 15000 spoken regional dialects , a myraid of dance and art forms. Even India is managing its invesments properly in preserving the culture and art being a developing nation. Therefore, the question is not just about enough funds it is about maintianing a balance between investments in diverse sections which can collectively allow the society to thrive and compete for a strong nation globally.

Some countries which lack fire power and are significantly feeble in terms of militia prowess, more investment in military is justified even then that counrty might trade of culture. Hence, although not all situation demand equal investments, preserving culture and art is important.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24812030075 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92982934657 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513784461153 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6793874601 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198683550663 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686406577065 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736948542994 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123663169241 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620007685729 0.0667264976115 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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