Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
The issue that is stated here is about whether the government should invest in arts as much as they do in the military. I mostly disagree with this for the following reasons.
To begin with, the Military is an essential part of any country. An efficient military system helps to protect the entire country from its enemies. The government should give priority to all three military types such as Army, Navy, and Air force over any other internal developments unless they are most necessary. In this regard, the military has to be allocated more funds over arts. For example, let us consider a country 'A' has invested twenty billion dollars each in the military and the arts. Now, there might be a possibility that this amount of funds allocated to the military are not sufficient as the enemy troop might be more powerful and we could not gather an equal amount of resources because of the scarcity of funds. Perhaps, if some part of the art funds were diverted to the military, then it would have helped the military to arrange more resources and hence win against the enemy troop.
To continue with, military people stay far from their families, and also, they are ready to sacrifice their lives to protect the country. so, it is the basic responsibility of any government to support all the families of the military people at any and every point in their lives. For this to happen, the government has to allocate sufficient funds to the military department. For instance, if any soldier sacrifices their life in any national war, then it is the government's responsibility to take the financial care of the immediate family members of the soldier. It cannot just say no because of a lack of funds. So, the government has to sufficiently allocate the required amount of funds to the military department in order to fulfill all its goals and responsibilities.
On the other hand, one cannot say that arts are not important at all for a country to prosper. Art can be of any form say, dance, music, painting, sketching, and many others. It is the art that helps individuals to think deeply, gain focus, and main other things which can commonly be stated as individual development. Art also helps people provide passionate work (for those who are keen on it). For instance, let us consider the famous Picasso paintings. Suppose these do not exist, then many painting artists would not have taken birth. These paintings also make the nation prestigious. So, arts being backed up by the government is also needed but it needs to consider the various factors when considering how much funds needs to be allocated to various fields.
Hence, it is needed for the government to invest in both arts and the military. For that matter, it has to invest in various many other fields for effective development as a nation. However, it is complex to decide how much it has to invest in absolute figures. It depends on various other factors such as the current country's situation, in which field, the country is lagging, and many others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2503.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 523.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78585086042 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61834282279 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462715105163 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 796.5 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7150607599 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7037037037 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3703703704 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2962962963 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337175901574 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885882224004 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104234002784 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211794227136 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101395106556 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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