Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Art can take any form, be it music, dance, drama or something that is related to craftsmanship. Military on the other hand is an important asset for a nation to have in order to protect its sovereign borders. Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military. I agree with the above statement and I provide the reasoning for my position in the paragraphs below.
Art can be of any form, a folk dance, a painting style which is unique to a particular tribe or a type of theater which emphasizes upon a particular way of it's delivery. These aspects, however small, ought to be the backbone of a culture they represent. For example, the world today has seen the extinction of a myriad number of art forms, since the government of those nations did not pay heed towards preserving them. These art forms, help the historians predict about the bygone years or the past centuries and therefore these art forms play a key role for ancient historic discoveries.
Governments of the world should raise awareness among the children of different age groups about art and it's various forms. It seems that the interest for art among children is dwindling. In order to encourage students to take up art or literature as their college major, governments should provide incentives to such students. You never know if one such student goes on to become a renowned artist of the current era. Perhaps, the knowledge gained about the art of previous years helped a student make a significant discovery about historic art. Such achievements would go a long way in preserving art as well as the culture, for the next generation to witness.
Individuals against such an initiative can argue that in the current times, when there is political uncertainty among the nations. An investment into the military would be of greater necessity than an investment in art. I would partly agree with such a statement since we are going through capricious times wherein the tensions between neighboring countries like India, Pakistan and China are at an all time high. But such political tensions will wane away in few days time. If we look at the larger picture, we would claim that equal investment should be provided to art as well, as it emanates the cultural diversity, especially for a country like India which is the home to a diverse cultures.
In sum, I would still stand by my position that governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military. The reason being that if we do not take corrective measures right away to protect art, the history of art and its many forms, could be lost into oblivion forever.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'culture'?
Suggestion: culture
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75545851528 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66966914614 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524017467249 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4094607166 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8095238095 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260795291112 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807745908144 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663894120193 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154661845604 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534159380068 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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