Scientific research is a determinant factor in prosperity of a nation. It is the driving force for progress, and it provides the opportunity for advancement of technology, and therefore improving the quality of lives of the citizens. However, the final outcome of a research should not be a major factor in deciding over allocating funds for it.
The knowledge that is generated in the course of a science research is as valuable--if not more valuable--as the final outcome of the study. For example, assume there is a project for exploring the deepest parts of the ocean looking for new species of animals. While adding one more line to the list of current species on earth seems insignificant, the same species might contain a certain gene or protein that can lead us to a cure for an incurable disease.
On the other hand, a vague and seemingly over-ambitious problem, while might be seen as a waste of resources, can have a major role other than the topic of the research itself. It can act as the driving force for advancement of education, intellectual development, and cooperation. Look at the NASA's Mars project. One might argue that with having a myriad of poverty and homelessness in the country, the money spent on studying Mars is not only a waste, but it is morally wrong. The important factor that this argument is omitting is that, yes it might be a short term solution to divert the Mars project funds to ameliorate poverty, but it will stultify the very next generation of citizens, who are going to ensure the future of the society, to gain education. With such amazing projects in place, many children of today will get motivated to become the engineers and scientists of tomorrow, thus ensuring a sustainable prosperity for the future of the country.
Is should be noted that the prompt's argument can be reasonable for research on solving time sensitive problems. Sometimes the fate of a nation depends on having practical solution to a problem in an immediate fashion. Having adequate energy resources is a good example. If a country faced an energy crisis, as many have had in the past, then funding research studies for finding replacement energy resources is crucial.
Overall, while some time sensitive and vital problems might bear short term diversion of funds, it should not prevent us, indefinitely, from encouraging ambitious and seemingly vague research studies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
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...country. Is should be noted that the prompts argument can be reasonable for research...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an immediate fashion" with adverb for "immediate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255033557047 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.143176733781 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0917225950783 0.0880659088768 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0357941834452 0.0497285424764 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0246085011186 0.0444667217837 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140939597315 0.12292977631 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0536912751678 0.0406280797675 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85590773743 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0178970917226 0.030933414821 58% => OK
Particles: 0.00223713646532 0.0016655270985 134% => OK
Determiners: 0.123042505593 0.0997080785238 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0313199105145 0.0249443105267 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00671140939597 0.0148568991511 45% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2404.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 402.0 452.878318584 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98009950249 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36815920398 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.300995024876 0.280924506359 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221393034826 0.200843997647 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13184079602 0.132149295362 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85590773743 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 219.290929204 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 59.5595529299 55.4138127331 107% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6470588235 23.380412469 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8390013318 59.4972553346 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.411764706 141.124799967 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 23.380412469 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.674092028746 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 53.7465613111 51.4728631049 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.20879120879 1.64882698954 134% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272559941056 0.391690518653 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129231778774 0.123202303941 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0729324925759 0.077325440228 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.593575492148 0.547984918172 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161790521756 0.149214159877 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125490339238 0.161403998019 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048789379976 0.0892212321368 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.351821245816 0.385218514788 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.171486834949 0.0692045440612 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180650792828 0.275328986314 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652725096784 0.0653680567796 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.