Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Education as the saying goes, is the keep to a successful life. Colleges and Universities are places for higher studies. Going to a college or university is crucial for every individual in a community or in a country as a whole. The author claims that government should make university and college free for everyone which I also agree. My reasons for supporting this claim are based on three major things.
Firstly, It will improve the standard of living of a country.
Getting a college or a university education for free will be advantageous for a country. This will enable a lot of high school graduates to attend college or university which will help the government in the long run. Individuals will acquire knowledge and skills which will help build the country and improve the standard of living of the country.
It also helps the individual to secure a good job which will help improve the standard of living of the person.
Also, it will be advantageous for the needy. Most people not do attend college or university because they do not have money to pay for university education. Most parents do not send their children to college because of money issues. This has cause a lot intelligent children to roaming on streets without jobs since most require a college degree qualification. However, if college education is made free, it will enable parents especially the needy ones to send their wards to college.
Furthermore, Former President of Ghana John Evans Mills is an example of how important college or university education is and it’s a need for everyone within a country to be able to attend. With his knowledge and skills obtained from his study of politics from the university, he was able to rule and government of Ghana with great leadership during his time of office. He understood the needs of country and created so many opportunities and developed Ghana.
To conclude, college education is crucial for the success of a country when made free. It will help the people in the country to acquire skills and knowledge which be beneficial for the country and the future of the country. Therefore I support the claim that university or college education should be made free in a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89389920424 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73034375095 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440318302387 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0982027057 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9523809524 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20551197397 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761790179737 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543406319655 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103636229009 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667838345847 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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