A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college or university
The author claims that a country should allow all of its students to study one national curriculum until they reach college which I also agree with the claim. Using the same standard of studying or teaching is beneficial in a country's system of education.
The reasons for supporting this claim are based on three major things.
Firstly, studying the same subjects in primary schools or following the same syllabus will help students to be able to focus well on their studies. Students will have a well structured format for education. It will them know the basics of some of courses they might want to specialize when they reach college level.
Also, using or following the same syllabus in every school in a country will help students when they change schools. This will enable the student to be able to focus well since whatever that was being taught in the previous is the same as what is been taught in the new school. This will help make studies easier.
Another reason is , Ghana for example has one particular system of education or some common particular courses like African Studies, Ghanaian language, and so on that every student who is in both primary, junior high school and secondary school must follow. This system of education o or course like Ghanaian language has enables many students in Ghana to have a broad knowledge of the various languages in Ghana. This kind of practice would be beneficial for every students in Ghana and help them to express themselves in any language at any place in Ghana they find themselves
To conclude, using the same syllabus or the same system of education would help improve students and broaden their minds. Therefore, I agree with the claim that students take common compulsory before they reached college or university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, so, therefore, well, for example, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93046357616 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41489909297 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503311258278 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2655992493 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.538461538 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249585227734 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945357881497 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965272089385 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14022799388 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122279370287 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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