governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The prompt explains that governments should offer free university/colleges education to all students. There has always been the sentiment in our society that getting a college education was a sure-fire way to making good money and climbing the socioeconomic ladder. The university experience is a one-of-a-kind opportunity to expand people’s critical thinking skills and find a field of study that one can focus on and create a career from. I agree that the Government, specifically the United States Government should pay for college/university education for students and these are the reasons why.
First, the U.S government should pay for college education for students as it removes one of the largest barriers that stop people from continuing their education, which is tuition, textbooks and fees. Institutions such as the UC system have tuition in the twenty to thirty thousand dollars per year for in-state and out-of-state is even higher, discouraging thousands of students from applying because of the price tag. Families in the lower and middle socioeconomic class see these tuition prices, scaring them out of applying and attending a university such as UCSD or UC Davis, which are highly credible universities and opting for cheaper schools that may not have high notoriety. Having a system where the U.S.government pays for college and university education for students would remove this barrier for hundreds of thousands of students who wish to further their knowledge.
Next, if the U.S government would offer a free college education for students, creating a stream of individuals who now have degrees leading to a higher educated workforce. Statistics show that people who receive an associate or a bachelor's degree, have a greater chance of finding a career as well as having higher-paying jobs when compared to individuals who do not have a degree. This ultimately leads to better financial stability and upward socioeconomic mobility. We can generally see that people who do not have degrees tend to occupy menial jobs and have lower socioeconomic status while people with degrees will tend to have jobs in which are leadership positions and higher socioeconomic status. Having a college education paid by the U.S. Government for students will undoubtedly have benefits.
Finally, one concern is how the U.S. Government would pay for this proposal. After all, this idea would require major funding either from raising current taxes, constructing new taxes or removing funding from a different sector and applying to this proposal. People are not too fond of increasing or creating new taxes as they feel that that Government is taking away their money, but when examining tuition, textbooks and fees that colleges have, increasing taxes would be a much cheaper avenue than handing over tens of thousands of dollars which has to be done before each semester starts leading to loans and interest to build, it would make sense have the government pay fora college education so that people do not have to stress on tuition, loans, interest and possibly even defaulting.
When it comes to college and university education, I agree that it should be free of charge to students, paid for by the U.S. Government due to the topics I mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, so, well, while, after all, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2753.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 525.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24380952381 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92586805151 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 844.2 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.9374891125 60.3974514979 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.941176471 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8823529412 23.4991977007 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228764878785 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100255819531 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875392689701 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154299824293 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059110985918 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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