Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Imposing fees or not for university education was always controversial topic where some think it is a bad idea to apply, others align with the prompt recommendation to adopt it. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the suggestion in the prompt and argue for two reasons.
First of all, offering high-level education for free, will result in the availability of educated human resources for all market fields so improve the country economy. For example, by applying this suggestion the number of software engineering graduates will increase which will cover the needs of the market leading to more development and exportation of the software and technology products. This will improve overall economy of the country and the standard of living for its citizens.
Secondly, allowing more people to continue their college education will lead to more satisfaction and happiness for the people. For instance, many of people in different places around the world do not have enough money to continue their education and achieve their life goals to pursue their life-goal careers. So helping them to achieve their dream will make them happier. As recent studies, state that happiness and satisfaction is main factors for increasing the productivity. Therefore, by increasing the human resources for various fields and increasing the overall human satisfaction and happiness will lead to more productivity and improve in overall economy.
Finally, some may argue that this suggestion will affect the country's economy as no one will pay for his/her education so losing one of the income resources for the government. However, applying this recommendation will increase the investments in other life sectors and industries grabbing more benefits compared to the education fees. Briefly, freeing the charge of high-level education can be considered a freeing of chained and unused human resources and happiness.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 297.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45117845118 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86523479875 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521885521886 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2426724264 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.538461538 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 5.21951772744 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136116240886 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549992993785 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386307908273 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093819649165 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285866237539 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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