Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The corporations' responsability towards society was always a controversial topic as some believe that corporates' only responsibility is to gain money and pay their employees whereas others think that these companies should contribute in order to improve society in various aspects. In my opinion, I think companies should promote the well-being of societies for the following three reasons.
First of all, The contribution to society will result in a future benefit to the corporates. For example, by providing free internships and training for undergraduate and graduate students, these companies will improve their future workforce by preparing potential employees for the market. Without doing this, these corporates' financial state will deteriorate due to the lack of the needed skills to operate.
Secondly, supporting the civil society organizations will indirectly improve the company's sales. For instance, donating to charities with money will affect overall the positive image of the companies which will lead to an increase in sales. If the companies disregard the contribution to the well-being of civil society, its members will lose their trust and sympathy for them which will lead to a sales decline.
Finally, helping the government in the pollution reduction efforts will lead to healthy society members. These healthy members are the core of any organization as they represent the potential employees and consumers. without the existence of these healthy members, the company's overall economical status will collapse and broke.
Some may argue that these companies already pay taxes that are used by the government to improve the overall environment and society? one can reply that is not enough to bring the maximum benefit to these corporates. In brief, the corporates and society are mirrored to each other, without a good society no prosperous corporates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in brief, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 288.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56944444444 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92022765422 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8876313106 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.571428571 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.21951772744 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17600142154 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610885681592 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685322139951 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103898305738 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882372149008 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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