Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Education is important for the development and advancement of a country . It is the government's responsibility to ensure high percentage of literacy in the country and one of the crucial step is imparting free education to the students.The position on this statement is explained in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly 10% of the world's population is below the poverty line.It is impossible for students of such financial background to cover the expenses in college or university.Due to this those who have excellent academic standards might discontinue due to lack of funds.This is why the government should support such students by providing free education.In India, government has introduced free education till 10 grade in all the states which improved literacy rate drastically.
Although it is important to provide free education , it might not be practically possible considering the country's economic condition.To overcome this the fee for the students can be decided based on the annual income of the family.Students from stable and rich financial background could pay the fee so that this reduces the burden on the government and also aids in supporting those who are in need. Many Institutions of national importance in India are now following the same process where the fee structure of the student is determined by their family income.
To conclude , government should take necessary action to impart education at free cost to as many students possible. It should also keep an eye on the expensive institutions and constantly monitor them .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 245.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22857142857 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02663811093 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563265306122 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7185266823 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190448704577 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673067908044 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554721158421 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121202125137 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310877562136 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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