Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this ?
It is irrefutable fact that a person committing crime should be punished by the law to maintain order in the society.But I believe that the punishments should be decided on considering various other factors.
Firstly ,it is important to identify the root cause for the crime to occur.The gravity of the situation that provoked a person to involve in such dangerous situations must be properly analysed before determining the disciplinary action.For example, consider a child stealing food from a shop or committing a theft.Agreed, that this misconduct is an offense but it is also necessary to note that this act is out of pure desperation for food and the intention is not to harm anyone.Sending the child to a to juvenile home is more justified than sentencing him.Similarly,a father attacking a criminal responsible for assaulting his child is a punishable offense.Although it is these actions birthed from anger and injustice for his ward and not out of malice. So rather than subjecting him to sentencing, a disciplinary action seems justified.
However, government should also have fixed laws for heinous crimes like human trafficking, homicides and rape and many more.It is important to instill a sense of fear of law among the people in society so as to reduce the crime rate.Government should also provide awareness among the people about the repercussions for the actions that threaten human welfare and peace.
To conclude law and the judicial administration should consider various other scenarios and take action against a crime depending on the situation and well being of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, still, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23643410853 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18651093392 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573643410853 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 238.830986264 49.4020404114 483% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.2 106.682146367 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264282592548 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132234838286 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822971806393 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162568761581 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564118631288 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 13.0946893788 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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