Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Education is a right every individual should have and should not be impeded because of the parsimonious condition of the family. The prompt says that all the students should receive free education for college and university. I mostly agree to this statement and argue that education is the most important currency in today's world with the following two reasons.
Firstly, education charges for the private and government colleges are exorbitant and they keep proliferating. Students who come from a low income background find it very difficult to pay such excessive fee of the education institute. For example, if we have a student who's father earn a meager salary and it barely can bolster the family day to day problem, but somehow the students manages to complete his schooling. Later during the time of selecting a college it is very daunting task for him to select a college that will have a good curriculum and a very paltry fee, as such are almost non-existence it becomes a very difficult task for the student to select such college and the only idea that comes to his or her mind is to drop the idea of studying further and start some job that pays them barely enough to survive. This adverse condition can be seen in a lot of middle to low class family and out nation has an abundant of those. The only way for education is if the government starts to offer free education to all the students as this will help the students explore all the possibilities and experience all the possibilities he thinks or or wants to explore.
Secondly, free education can lead to more growth of the country and more innovations which in turn will increase the economical conditions of the country. If all the students are given free education in college and university they have the flexibility to select from a diverse range of courses and according to their interest rather than what their family income permits them. This will help the students to select the desired course and will keep them sated with their work rather than working somewhere which they will always have aversion for. This will help the students to grow exponentially in their field of choice, which in turn will increase the new innovations in the country and attract other nations visit the country and will also increase the economical conditions of the country.
Finally, it is really a difficult task to make the education free of cost for the whole country is agreeable, but looking at the benefits and the results of this then it is really a risk worth taking. Instead of starting with the country as a whole the government can start with a few states or a few cities in all the state. This will help not only to identify the benefit of this but also will provide a conspiciuos results.
In conclusion, if the students are given free education from their government they are tend to benefit both the mass and the country as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: who's
...tute. For example, if we have a student whos father earn a meager salary and it bare...
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...erience all the possibilities he thinks or or wants to explore. Secondly, free edu...
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Suggestion: economic
...vations which in turn will increase the economical conditions of the country. If all the s...
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... the country and will also increase the economical conditions of the country. Finally, ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...ducation from their government they are tend to benefit both the mass and the countr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2409.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74212598425 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59408116363 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435039370079 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 761.4 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4911689803 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.705882353 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8823529412 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207855505352 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801185895565 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559015780851 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123087853396 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390399158679 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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