Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students
The author of the statement stated that the government should make education free to all the students. Many of us will argue that this will hold all the time and others will counter this. In my essay, I will highlight both the side of the statement and will provide sound reasoning for the same.
As we know education plays a major role in shaping the career of students. The more successful students are in their career the better the growth opportunities and a great future which in turn proves out to be useful for the society, the country they are residing in one way or another. So, the government should make sure in their particular region that everyone gets access to education. There could be many ways to provide education or encourage their citizen to study and one of them could be as suggested by the author is free education.
Free education will definitely encourage the parents to send their children to school or college and this would be even beneficial for the economically backward people who do not even have access to basic amenities. This step will also bring changes in society and the difference between the rich and poor could be eradicated because poor children have access to education as we know that education is the most powerful tool to bring the changes in the society and after completing his studies he would able to get a good job and help his family.
But as we know every coin has two sides, free education too. The problem with is recommendation is that if a government start offering the education for free of cost then, how they will pay the salaries of education staff and all the other facilities provided in the school or colleges like labs playing grounds, library and many more. These things will become burdens on the government financial institutes and they will start taking more tax from the public, in order to compensate the free education.
Furthermore, for countries like UK, USA, and many other western countries it may be viable to provide free of cost education because of their GDP and less population, but this idea will fail in the countries like India and many South Asian countries. These countries are facing various other issues like poverty, safe drinking water and even the literacy rate in these country are very low as compared to other countries in the world and if they make the education free then this will be a disastrous step for their country
Last but not the least, but still even after many drawbacks and flaws in the idea of free education no one could deny that this step should be taken by all the countries, and to overcome these flaws they should find out about the best possible way to implement the idea.
In sum, free education for all is good and the government must consider this, but as mentioned above it may not be feasible for each and every country as they are struggling with many other things which are important for human survival.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rovide sound reasoning for the same. As we know education plays a major role in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2431.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 515.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72038834951 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43724980952 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452427184466 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.9 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.712672532 60.3974514979 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.066666667 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3333333333 23.4991977007 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242528171715 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101508994802 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843070070563 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132318535048 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542731115558 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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