Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Student debt is a serious issue in many countries arounf the world these days which is
leadign to a decrease in enrollments to universities over the years.The prompt suggests that college and university education should be fully funded for all
students by the government. I do not completely agree with the assertion, due to the following
three reasons.
Firstly, education today is extremely expensive for most of the students. There are many
factors that contribute to this ballooned tution cost such as faculty salaries,
lab maintainence, dormitory maintanence along with certain additional expenses such as
the costs related to research. Although tution costs for various universities are very
high in several countries such as United States but it also needs to be taken in
consideration, whether government can afford to fund these universities completely.
For example, if all the universities are fully funded by the governemnt the total cost
for all the universities can be a massisve amount that may not be a good idea. Hence, as
university education is not a primary requirement for living, these funds can be utilised
in other neccesseties such as healthcare and primary education.
Furthermore, if the college and university education becomes free of charge, there is no
gurantee that students will not become less serious about the cources they persue.
In current scenario, students ruminate over their decision of chosing the field they
study in university for months before actually taking the final decision. This
leads them to be extremely serious and diligent about the fields they want to persue.
But if the education becomes entirely free, there is no stopping students to enroll
themselves in cources which dont hold any actuak value for them. For instance, if a
student is passionate about coputer science, then they will chose that course only
whether education is free or paid. On the other hand, if a student is not sure what
they want to persue in the future, they may enroll in any number od cources such as music
and arts. This will not only lead to wasting years of the student whileo studying
something which may not hold any value in the fututre, but also leads to wastage of
governemt funds which could be utilised in a better way for far more neccessary things.
Lastly, some people may argue that university cost puts extra burden on students as many have to
opt for education loans for persuing the cources of their interests. This is also
leading to accumulation of immense student debt. Hence, instead of fully funding the
education for all students, government should focus on providing more need and merit based
scholaships which will help deserving students escape this debt circle. For instance,
if a student is performing well in the cources related to the ones they want to enroll
for in the university then they may be rewarded with a full scholarship depending on
extend of need and their financial status. Such steps are already taken by the government,
but increasing their implementation will help a lot of students and education system all
together.
This will not only help students get rid of the financial burden that comes with education
but also help to improve any countries crime rates and overall mental health due to less
educatin loans. This way talented students can right away start earning after leaving
university and support the government through taxes. Therefore, it is a win-win situation for
both parties.
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...t that may not be a good idea. Hence, as university education is not a primary re...
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... for living, these funds can be utilised in other neccesseties such as healthcare...
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...their decision of chosing the field they study in university for months before ac...
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...actually taking the final decision. This leads them to be extremely serious and d...
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...ther hand, if a student is not sure what they want to persue in the future, they ...
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...l in any number od cources such as music and arts. This will not only lead to was...
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...ing years of the student whileo studying something which may not hold any value i...
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...cources of their interests. This is also leading to accumulation of immense stude...
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...s on providing more need and merit based scholaships which will help deserving st...
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...s escape this debt circle. For instance, if a student is performing well in the c...
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...ded with a full scholarship depending on extend of need and their financial statu...
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...lot of students and education system all together. This will not only help stu...
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...nancial burden that comes with education but also help to improve any countries c...
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...ducation but also help to improve any countries crime rates and overall mental health d...
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...es and overall mental health due to less educatin loans. This way talented studen...
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...Therefore, it is a win-win situation for both parties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2987.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 573.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21291448517 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70227520791 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469458987784 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 908.1 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3239634939 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.772727273 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0454545455 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 39.0 4.97078651685 785% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217616529488 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073964195684 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043117900174 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584889026552 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413935925075 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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