Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Getting an admit to a university tells us a lot about the calibre of the student. Students spend a lot of time preparing for the various entrance exams to get in to the best universities and when they succeed, money could be a hindrance in the run. The prompt recommends that government should offer a free university education for the students who cannot afford the tuition fee. In my opinion I strongly believe with this suggestion and argue that government should look at it with the long-term benefits associated with it for the following reasons.
To begin, students who will would graduate from different universities are the future and would be the one responsible for the growth and development of the country where they live. If students are not allowed to develop the technical knowledge and skill set required to perform various jobs and research, the country would be lacking behind in terms of research and development. For instance, the truth behind the United States being a developed nation while India still called a developing nation lies behind the fact that literacy rate is higher in United States than in India and people in India leave education at an early age and start working at a minimum wage due to the need of money. The above example illustrates that education is a must for everybody and if government invests in educating the youth, it will return the benefits in the long run as knowledge is power.
Further, educating each and every student would lead to the birth of noble minds with great skills who would be the founder of various companies and ventures, bringing about a change and thus leading to the growth in the employment, which would eventually lead to exorbitant collection of taxes. For instance , a state which has large number of new companies coming up would boost the respective sector , thereby bringing competition at a global level, leading to improved employment scale and encouraging tax payment to the government .This will ultimately lead to the welfare of the country and will also boost the economy , hence there will be a great return on investment made by the government .
Of course, some people argue that investment made by government will lead to depletion of resources at national level , however investment made in educating the people who are needy will ultimately bring about long term benefits as it always said the power lies in the minds of people with greatest knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so, still, thus, while, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95145631068 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65464268131 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514563106796 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.4782185157 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.454545455 118.986275619 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4545454545 23.4991977007 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 5.21951772744 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188904151137 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984995248923 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109912873529 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120926657219 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854072839648 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 14.1392134831 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.