Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition

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Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.

The proposed policy, requiring governments to fully pay for college tuition for students that have been admitted and can’t financially afford it rotates around the idea that Education, especially higher education, plays a fundamental role in the long-term wealth of a country. A country that invests in its own young citizens and in the development of their skills is a country that invests in the development of its future supply of services with high profit margins. Surely, the cause is honorable and the obligation that a government would carry out by following the stated policy would be beneficial, but let’s not forget that resource constraint exist when implementing such radical decision.
There is no doubt that deserving students that have talent and want to cultivate it with dreams of a better life for themselves and their families must be helped by their own country. At the end of the day, that’s the reason why the field of economics exsts: to optimally manage resources in order to maximize the well-being of the actors of one economy. There have also been many examples of students with great talent but poor economic conditions. Ramanujan, a mathematical prodigy from India, was granted a scholarship to study and research Mathematics at Cabridge in the United Kingdom, because talent must be found and cultivated for the overall improvement of society.
It is also true that financial help from the government will inevitably create an implicit system of incentives for students to study and work hard to get into college, without having to think too much about the financial limits of his family, an extrinsic force that the student cannot fully control. Additionally, a government is free to monetize its budget deficit if that requires issuance of money to finance a surge in university entries from students uncapable of paying for their tuition.
On the other hand, it should be considered that this freedom of monetization of the government deficit finds limits itself. A country may find itself in a debt trap where it cannot afford further accretion of financial obligations. Furthermore, monetization through issuance of money from the national Central Bank may lead to serious problems of inflation in the long-run, assuming that the country is not already in that condition. The problem of being constraint in terms of resources increases whenever a country’s universities find themselves at the top of the global ranks. The U.S. provides some of the best services in terms of superior education with well-known universities such as Harvard, MIT, Princeton and many more. Such pool of successful colleges would not only attract domestic citizens but also international students, determining an impressive surge of demand at points where a government cannot face it through an increase in its fiscal balance.
In addition, each university has different entry requirements for students. Some are looser than others and it may cause a diversion of funds against students that because of superior talent or harder work succeeded in sequiring a position in a superior university where entry percentages remain below 4%. In that case a government may want to pose a limit to its financing abilities and further introduce a merit based process where both a student’s financial conditions and its skills are evaluated.
Lastly, a government may actually decide to not intervene directly but through the use of national banks and national providers of student loans which are better set to analyze the risk profile of each student when submitting a loan request. A government may kick in by subsidizing those loans in such a way that students will have to pay lower interest rates and will have flexibility in choosing refinancing programs.
In conclusion, allowing students with poor financial needs to pursue their dreams is inevitably a duty that a government must take on their shoulders but a system where the government unconditionally pays for college tuition for every student admitted in a university will result in inefficiencies and disincentives in the long-term. That’s way a merit based system should also be considered in the process because in reality each student will provide for a specific case that must be studied and evaluated on its own.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 400, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to refinance'.
Suggestion: to refinance
...s and will have flexibility in choosing refinancing programs. In conclusion, allowing st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 29.0 11.3162921348 256% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 104.0 58.6224719101 177% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3615.0 2235.4752809 162% => OK
No of words: 693.0 442.535393258 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21645021645 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.13077900149 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90862705022 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 337.0 215.323595506 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486291486291 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 1130.4 704.065955056 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9133603386 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.318181818 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20360336859 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614426787808 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471912392846 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104174404497 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396575269741 0.0667264976115 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 100.480337079 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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