Government of any form , be it Demoractic,Republic,Monarchy etc. is responsible to bestow the best for the welfare of the people below or par to the poverty line. Education is one of the prime factor that decides the future of a nation.Therefore the role played by the government on education plays a predominant role in bringing up the burgeoning younger generations which reciprocates the well being of the nation.There is a clear demarcation line in education rendered to the rich and the poor. The Elite spend humongous on whatever they needed to achieve, as it is just a chump change compared to the wealth they posses.Whereas the poverty struck people,who are really skillful and intellectual are not even exposed to the primary education that is mandatory in most of the countries as per UNICEF conventions.
Government must provide free education to any student who is meritorious but cannot afford further to continue his education.Ostensibly,Government can enhance the schemes to render scholarship programs for such Brilliant minds.They can fix a target GPA or Average to be achieved by such students nd a fix quota to join the university,encourage them with free amenities , accomodations and stipends for research and provide them a path for achieving more ,which in turn can bring accolades to the nation in return.
To conclude with, Bolstering the profoundly talented minds by the government will ensure that the future of the nation is well articulated with a seemingly talented younger generation.Thus the government can very well harness it's success by nurturing the students who can truly be a asset to the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nurturing the students who can truly be a asset to the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, therefore, thus, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 263.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21673003802 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.80566739319 2.79657885939 136% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.576483553 60.3974514979 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 228.666666667 118.986275619 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.8333333333 23.4991977007 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194280572541 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081955177998 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513071693529 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126494221643 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344719549786 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 14.1392134831 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 48.8420337079 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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