Society which is otherwise termed the community is an amalgamation of various culture, traditional aspects, language, rituals, clothing, lifestyle of people etc. Likewise, major cities are a mixture of people from various other smaller cities or towns around the major cities' geographical location. I strongly believe that analyzing the sections of people and their culture in metropolitan cities help us derive the important aspects of a society. In the following passage, I discuss about the various factors that must be considered from the big cities to collaboratively understand about a society.
Firstly, metro cities demography is considered a viable point to start analyzing the features of a society. Learning their daily routines can help us understand the traditions and values followed in a particular culture. For instance, majority of people in Indian cities follow a tradition called Surya namaskar, where they salute the Sun with certain yogic positions followed my meditation. This has been their ritual followed right from their ancient times. Apparently, people following such practices are said to have longevity of life. Similarly, a demographic survey can be conducted in order to understand the healthy lifestyle followed by the people of a particular society. However, other criterias like language and attire can also be taken in to account. For example, the middle east countries especially in Dubai city Abaya and Kandura are the native attires of the Emiratis. Comparing the language spoken by majority of the people provides us the linguistic divisions among the society. For instance, India being the world's biggest linguistically formed nation based on the language spoken by different states.
Furthermore, Religions, caste and creed data are derived from deeply analyzing the roots of various segments of people in a particular society. It is important to analyze the various income groups of people of the major cities to conclude about the per capita income range of the society. Again Dubai can be quoted as one of the world's richest city that it is no wonder its' citizens own more than 2 exquisite cars whilst leading a prodigal lifestyle.
To recapitulate, Metro cities are likely to be the best viable option for exploring a demographics' lifestyle and society in to which they are nurtured. I strongly believe the assertions and examples quoted could indeed be helpful in dissecting the much complex society subjected to study it's characterstics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37084398977 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88083775932 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537084398977 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1653040178 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.526315789 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139828384032 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044059923233 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343579212659 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964462635369 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298766175241 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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