Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been
admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning
for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the
possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape
your position.
university education is of utmost importance to every ambitious student, who wills to give out the best in him and dreams of making it big in his life. there are several top notch universities across the countries and abroad offering the best of the education and facilities to their students. however, when it comes to the part of paying of fees that includes either tuition fees, accomodation fees, student membership fees and others, it is more often than not the situation where the student isn'y really in a position to be able to afford that fee. Despite qualifying the toughest entrance examinations of prestigious institutions, few students wouldn't really be able to make it through the portals of these institutions, owing to the huge numbers in fees.
however, it is not the case that all the universities in a country are extremely costly. but such universities are generelly regarded as the B-grade colleges or two-tier institutions, which may not be of the standards of other higher ranked colleges. but the highly reputed and top ranked institutions major include government/Public universities in any country, and thus it might be of immense use to any qualified student if the governments consider offering free university education to students who have made it thorugh all the required selection procedures in order to secure a seat in these universiti, but cannot afford to pay the fees. And, by free university education we majorly wanted to eliminate the high tuition fee, which in general in supposed to be the major financial burden to most of the students. however, if the prospective student feels it difficult to even bear the costs of other parts of the fee that include mess fee, and accomodation fee, it would be kind on the government's part to reconsider and admit him at absolutey full scholarship, if the candidate if found to be exceptionally qualified for the admission into the institutions. For instance, there are Indian institutes of Technology in India, which consistently rank high in world rankings and which do consider offering full tution fee waivers and other scholarships to students if found fit for the seat into these premiere institutions. this not only benefits the students who are unable to afford the university fee, but in return also brings name and fame to the college if that very students graduate with flying colors.
however, it is also not advisable to offer free university education to all the students studying at a university as this might bring a dearth in the funds required for the university in order to maintain and run the institutions; in which case the universities should consider lowering the cost of tuition fees if not completely waiving it off.
Finally, the conclusion as it stands now is it would be quite advantageoous to students if most of the government universities consider offering free university education to those who are in need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, really, so, thus, for instance, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2449.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05991735537 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98572735246 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469008264463 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 783.0 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.5210202985 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.384615385 118.986275619 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2307692308 23.4991977007 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290776975428 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11894328344 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071968948489 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21092880644 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422277964271 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.