GOVERNMENTS SHOULD PLACE FEW, IF ANY, RESTRICTION ON SCEINTIFIC RESEARCH AND DEVELOPMENT
Scientific research is the back bone of development of the world as well as individual countries. Scientific research is the power of imagination of humans and portrays efficacy of a human brain, though it could be said that not it reflects strength of different scientists serving for a particular nation or as an individual. Science is heterogeneous composed of good as well as bad inventions to an extent to which it could benefit mankind as well seriously harm the presence or extinct the human race.
So the prompt recommends that government should restrict the research work to an instinct which is safe to human kind so if any kind of potential threat which could hinder or cause harm to the humans as well as the environment is forestalled. Scientific research has become so advanced that in my apprehension it could shape the world as we imagine, not exactly but close to over imagination. Though similar to positive outcomes there are chances of negative and threatening outcomes as well, due to which I mostly agree with the prompt that there should be certain amount of restrictions on scientific research and development to eliminate or control the negative outcomes, as per my perception it should be strictly implemented due to following reasons.
To begin with, most of the scientific research’s are related to disease in human body which is one of the most important area of research but as I mentioned earlier as there are positive outcomes there are negative outcomes as well, for example if a new drug is invented by a pharmaceutical scientist related to cure of kidney stones in the form of capsules and which minimize the surgical removal of stones, though it may cure kidney stone but only after certain patients have had an dose then only it can be judged if it works properly without any side or harmful effects, though medicines are tested on controlled conditions or on a particular cluster of humans before full fledge commercial selling. But that doesn’t means it won’t affect other human bodies, it could be harmful for certain patients. For example in America in 1999 a drug called paracitamol tablet was full fledged as a cure of general cold which had an many registered cases of side effects in which people had acne on there whole body and due to which the drug was banned in the united states.
Its not limited to just pharmaceuticals each and every aspects of science has its merits and demerits for an instance in 1990’s usa, china, Russia, india and all the other major counties were planning to use nuclear capabilities being nuclear powered counties but after they saw the consequences of nuclear attack which happened in hirosima and Nagasaki they restricted the usage of nuclear weapons though being an nuclear capable country is an achievement but its use could threaten the human race as a whole and is capable to destroy our species so, restrictions are implemented on nuclear weaponries.
To conclude there should be restrictions on research which has an negative impact to the world or environment in which we live in and there should be encouragement in the research which benefits the world and human kind, like internet which revolutionized everything today without living internet is like living in stone age, though in the past it seemed like a dream to achieve what we have today but science in a controlled and restricted manner has a capability to change the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, well, for example, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2873.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 580.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95344827586 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85601561762 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453448275862 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 906.3 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.0359550562 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.928396602 60.3974514979 326% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.181818182 118.986275619 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.7272727273 23.4991977007 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128229805105 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602593031701 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547138995328 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835149304824 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595428109292 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 14.1392134831 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 48.8420337079 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 12.1743820225 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 11.2143820225 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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