Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. To what extent to you agree or disagree ?
We as humans have evolved from Stone Age to the modern world and have made inconceivable advancement, but for survival our priorities are set to basic necessities like food, water, air and house to which majority of us has copious amount of access and many options to utilize that resources but not everyone has an option to access that resource to which In my view I mostly agree.
As we have evolved so far that we have managed to facilitate our daily lives with technology and are further advancing towards a better future. For instance, let’s consider an example of banking, 100 years back no one would have even conceived about paperless banking or wire transfer of money at any time any where yet we have advanced so far that today we have options of payment via internet banking, credit/debit cards, mobile wallets etc without any hassle available 24*7. Under major circumstances it is true that we are surrounded by abundant number of options from which we consider which is most convenient for us.
At the same time, we have failed as the most evolved species on earth, even after having such a unimaginable evolution we are not able to fulfill basic necessities of certain class of people who are out there struggling to have clean water or a piece of bread. The human health organization reports that still 11% of the world population which is around 77 billion people does not have access to all basic necessities. So under certain circumstances it is false that we have numerous available choices.
So to infer, we can say that until everyone does not have equal right to basic necessities we cannot completely affirm that we have too many choices in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... for survival our priorities are set to basic necessities like food, water, air and house to whic...
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Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...g or wire transfer of money at any time any where yet we have advanced so far that today ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...pecies on earth, even after having such a unimaginable evolution we are not able ...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...le evolution we are not able to fulfill basic necessities of certain class of people who are out ...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...lion people does not have access to all basic necessities. So under certain circumstances it is f...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...l everyone does not have equal right to basic necessities we cannot completely affirm that we hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, for instance, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62353747265 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0921288499 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.0 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.25 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212832802065 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110082017093 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553954171419 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15093196376 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584952682695 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.