Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Essay topics:

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Language barrier can cause many social as well as practical problems living in a country where people speak different language. To which in my opinion I partially agree with the statement as knowing the native language were you are going to live is very important or it may cause hindrance in many ways.

First of all, it is kind of quiet obvious that if one does not know the native language of the country that they are staying in may cause serious problems. For example, if a student from India whose native language is not English and does not have any grip on the English language decides to move into a English speaking country for further studies then the individual might find it difficult to communicate with the professor and the natives of the country as well. The main purpose of getting education may seem practically near to impossible without knowing native language.

Secondly, on the other hand if a individual living in a country which speaks different language then the individuals native language does not always mean that the individual would face problems. If the individual is well aware and has a solid grip of the native language of the country then it would not cause any hindrance. For example, if a individual applies for permanent residency of Canada and knows the native language of Canada which is English and French and is proficient at both the languages then it would help the individual to settle into the culture of the country faster.

To conclude, living in a country where one has to speak foreign language is easy if one knows the native language of the country and if not it many cause many problems.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e English language decides to move into a English speaking country for further st...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ge. Secondly, on the other hand if a individual living in a country which sp...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ot cause any hindrance. For example, if a individual applies for permanent reside...
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Line 9, column 512, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...proficient at both the languages then it would help the individual to settle into...
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Line 13, column 144, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cause seems to be countable; consider using: 'many causes'.
Suggestion: many causes
...e language of the country and if not it many cause many problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for example, kind of, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8041958042 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51030688702 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440559440559 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4282303979 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.666666667 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7777777778 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2222222222 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390168633356 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187165386939 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121399816593 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272014754578 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077928501138 0.056905535591 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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