In virtue of its huge contribution in establishing abundance of modern society, many people think that any regulation should not be imposed on scientific research. However, without restriction on science research, many problems in various fields are expected.
Of course, the science is efficacious in various ways. Because the science is the strongest intellectual buttresses for flourish of modern era. It has facilitated advances for the society and individuals. For example, by inventing and developing many transportation technologies, science enhanced the range of activities. It fostered the growth of economy. Furthermore, owing to the development of information technologies, people now enjoy the wider relationship all around world. Apart from them, there are the enormous number of examples that science influenced in positive ways. Therefore, the excessive restriction to the scientific research should be avoided.
However, even though the scientific researches enable such developments in various field which are beneficial for both the society and individuals, unless they are well managed, it may generate deleterious side effects. First, the result of scientific research can cause serious environmental problem. For example, in Russia and Japan, the explosion accident of radiation plant occurred, and the radiation polluted the environment irreversibly. Due to its difficulty to recover once damaged environment, precautious measures for scientific research is needed. otherwise, the superficial development science research may end up with the catastrophe.
Second, the scientific research can generate several ethical problems. In pursuing blindly purpose of the research, some scientists may sacrifice many innocent lives of creatures far more than they needed. For instance, to invent new medicines many animals are killed during the experiments. Even though this process are unavoidable, because the deprivation of lifes is still immoral, the degree of the sacrifices should be controlled. Furthermore, unless the researches are monitored and scrutinized well, even the inalienable human right can be violated. If we recall the historical cases of Germany and Japan during World War Two, it becomes obvious that the concern is excessive. They committed a lot of cruel crimes for scientific research. By restriction, we need to prevent these tragedy. Or we will suffer several serious ethical problems, which even may threat our basic rights.
All in all, even though the science plays the salient role in progress of development of human being, the scientific research without being monitored and managed carefully can militate negative repercussions. For example, they can cause serious environmental and ethical problems. Therefore, the regulations on the science are necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2418.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92647058824 5.05705443957 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2593579232 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553921568627 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.6925548581 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.130434783 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7391304348 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52173913043 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173680495633 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542592585558 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754053895358 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111481529992 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422085565063 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.1639044944 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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