Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.Writ

Determining the major in the university is important issue. Because its repercussion for the future is considerable. In fact, in the modern society, there are enormous jobs which take part of the society. Due to the diversity, it seems to be impossible to set up only one standard to decide the students' field of study.

In case of the fields that mainly focuses on the scholar purposes, it is efficacious for students to consider solely their interests and talents when they decide their major. Because the fundamental goal of the scholars is not to generate huge amount of money but to actualize their interests about the field based on the talents. For example, the philosophy is notorious of the disability in earning money. However, the interests of the philosophers are far from the remunerative future. What they want to know through their studies is the ground of the diverse kinds of the knowledge, including metaphysics, ethics, and ontology. As we can see from the example, the gaining profit is less important issue for the scholars in various fields, If some student considers to be a scholar, it is better to concentrate on their talents and interests related with the field for their studying.

However, when students wish to establish their careers in the field largely focusing on the earning money,
the availability of jobs is important. Because depending on the availability the opportunities to generate financial advantages vary. Unless they widely consider the many factors in regard with the future job availability, the students would suffer difficulty in finding jobs. For instance, if a student wants to be a IT engineer, the student should consider diverse things including other people's interests. Regardless of the student's talents and interest, the demand of the field can be changed. So that in the event that the students want to get profitable job, they should not only focus on their talents and interests.

Admittedly, some people may worry that the expectation can be wrong because of the rapid change of the modern society. However, even though the detailed prediction for the future situation can be wrong easily, overall trend is comparatively predictable. For example, nobody could exactly foresee the present situation of the IT field in decade age. However, almost people could exactly expect that the jobs related with the computer will be flourished. Therefore, still when students are looking for the profitable jobs, they should consider several elements which would influence the future situation.

All in all, the consideration of the future job should be different according to the fields the students hope. For the young who want to be a scholar, the job availability is not salient thing to consider. However, if the student want to be someone who can earn a lot of money, then they should think of many things beyond their own interests and talents.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2442.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13025210084 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78286100501 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457983193277 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 757.8 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.10617977528 354% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8376491798 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.79166666667 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362860714817 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106599723754 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875642067168 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205706729845 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07593271905 0.0667264976115 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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