Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development

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Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.

Government being the governing body is held to be responsible for the overall development of the region under their control. The people look upon the elected candidates as their leaders and expect them to work for welfare of the future of the citizens. The scientific research and development acts to be the most robut pillar of the growth of the nation. It has always proved its important in all the sense. It is really worthy to give a free hand to work in there own way. But, there is also a possibility of existance of perverted practice when set free, thus, partially agree with the thought.
Government actions decides the growth of nation and thus, good decision always makes a way toward development of the nation. The restrictions act as a hinderance to the potential of the human. They can not express their whole enthusiasm in such restrictive envrionment. The freedom in some sense may give rise to new minds with out-of-box ideas and new way of thinking. It also creates inclination of work in experienced personnels even after long service. This freedom create proper equilibrium between experience and enthusiam. The best example can be Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam the former President of India. He continues to be ideal for any innovative brain and his journey from a neophyte to adept is really encouraging. Thus, imposing few restrictions would result in effectiveness.
The Research and Development deduces new ways of living and scrutinize it applicability in real life. The scientists dives deeper into details of any field and make an attempt to pick best approach among all. The nation growth is respresented mainly with the factors such as innovation rate, technological development and contribution to the global learning, thus, research and development plays vital role in nourishment of reputation of the nation. It gathers the most finest brains in country and gives them a chance to contribute. China being one of the developed country has always supported its research with all necessary aspects such as finance, freedom of experimentation and attract new comers and encourage them to gain high knowledge and contribute for nations growth. Thus, such a noble field must be entrusted and apply fewer restrictions on scientific research and development.
The restrictions sometimes are necessary to avoid certain henious activities to occur. Some activities may grow with the malecious intention. The greed and corruption in the nation may trap even the most finest brains to perform evil acts. These inculcate the feeling of ingrate in them towards the nation. The lack of restrictions may also result in detrimental acts on the living being and their basic rights. One of the such example is of Atomic Bomb attack on Hiroshima and Nagasaki by Air Forces of USA. Though this made a victorious come back of USA in World War 2, but in return demanded lives of innocent civilians. Thus, some restrictions becomes necessary to avoid dangerous consequences of the development.
Finally, the research and development make the nation developed and self-content, thus, the government must support it with imposing restrictions as less as possible. But, must keep an insight to refrain malecious acts, under the name of the research.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, may, really, so, thus, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2723.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 530.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13773584906 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9167791431 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515094339623 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 836.1 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.987818766 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8387096774 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0967741935 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93548387097 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238122029657 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556323994078 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651635292182 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14237728257 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553160942215 0.0667264976115 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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