Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
The culture of a nation represents the prosperity, depth and beauty of the civilization. The culture tells us about various rituals, trends and adaptations that occured since our ancesters exists. It helps us to make the living easier from the experience of the older ones. It becomes responsibility of government to preserve the varied culture in the nation. It is really shameful to say that some of the culture have lost their existence due to unavailability of financial aid. I agree cities must be provided with finance in order to grow, but, it is not acceptable to give whole credit to city for preservation of the culture.
In modern era, the cities are responsible to accelerate the growth of nations by overall development. It has become a prime source of wealth by giving advanced facilities, exposure of tradition, attracting the tourists, exporting the local arts, developing the technology and production on high level. The major cities head the nation towards developed one. Due to educational and research facilities, it is also responsible to attract various researchers, industrial experts, technological gaints and students to visit and share knowledge on global scale. Though for such a high-scale development, the most important factor is funds, thus, the government should provide adequate funds to such extraordinary activities.
It can be said that the cities with their advancements were able to collate the diversified culture of the nation at one place. It provides the facilities of muesems, libraries and art galleries to show-case the varied culture of the nation. Also, the various institutions have taken the responsibility of researching in the depths of these cultures and effectively present the beauty of thinking put forth by our ancestors. For an instance, the perfect example of presentation of Indian culture is Chatrapati Shivaji International Airport. I was fascinated to see use of various arts in decoration, enchanting the environment with the folk music, along with that adding a flavour of current trends in the form of modern eastern cultural statues and resorts. This made me aware about the role cities plays in enhancing the fame of culture of the nation.
Though, I do not deny the contribution of the cities in preservation of the nation's culture, but, the rurals have greatly contributed in this process. Our ancestors being the brilliants of this culture preferred living in villages with soothing and natural feel. Thus, most of the culture of nation can be digged up in rurals itself. There simplicity, folk arts, regional food, diverse languages, clothing style, society system and many different factors form a strong pillars of the nation's culture. Late Lal bahadur shashtri was personality of high values, simple attitude, decent dressing style became the prime-minister of India lived his most of the days of life in the villages that embibed in him great qualities. So, the government should look after rural areas as well in order to preseve the culture and heritage of the nation.
The final message from this discussion can be given as being the ruling body of the nation, the government must invest in development and parallelly get hold of the culture by providing adequate amount of funds in major cities as well as rural areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...serve the varied culture in the nation. It is really shameful to say that some of ...
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Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...tion. It is really shameful to say that some of the culture have lost their existence due t...
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Line 4, column 432, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ges, clothing style, society system and many different factors form a strong pillars of the na...
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Line 4, column 469, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'pillar'?
Suggestion: pillar
...nd many different factors form a strong pillars of the nations culture. Late Lal bahadu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2768.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 534.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18352059925 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92632103421 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 880.2 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6230326502 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29166666667 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250931518124 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777937174334 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649089123398 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150602618792 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492309216239 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 100.480337079 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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