Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
It is said that science is a boon as well as bane, science can be very advantageous if the use is for the greater good of people and society, considering the research or experiments is undertaken to reach the goal of benefiting everyone but it can be a bane if the purpose is malafide or science as a knowledge is misused to get a personal advantage at a cost of harm to others. At the heart of the debate over the placing of fewer or no restrictions by the government on scientific research and development is broached in this prompt.I mostly agree to the prompt as I believe that the government should place restrictions on the scientific research and development so as to keep the check over the malafide use of such research.For instance, scientific research that is undertaken to develop a chemical weapon or to sabotage the society must be stopped and it can be traced and stopped only if such checks are placed. More restrictions will surely paralyze the scientific development and research as it will make researchers involved in complying with the formalities, therefore i believe that unnecessary restrictions should be cut.
Scientific research and development should be bolstered by the government so that new technologies can be innovated that can be used for the greater good of the society and the nation. Ease of doing scientific research will surely lead to a prosperous future as more technologies can be developed,milestones can be achieved in the health sector, nation's infrastructure can be build perfectly and arduous tasks will certainly take less time to be done and this will surely benefit people. For instance Indian government in order to bolster the scientific research give tax Exemptions in Direct Tax so that people may contribute and undertake scientific research.
Fewer restrictions on scientific research will also open up the way to eradicate the persisting problems of unemployment as graduates of the respective streams will get employment to undertake scientific research and demand for the equipments that are used in the scientific research will also surge leading into a rise in demand as a boost to the economy. New innovations will also provide new opportunities to the people and provide them new ways of occupation.
While allowing free scientific research have many pros but their are certain cons , the government must place restrictions on the research and development of such products that will be deleterious for the people, society, nation and the world.For instance, a research undertaken to develop a virus that will be used as a chemical weapon to eradicate masses has to stopped . It is necessary for the government to put a system of checks so that undue benefits of the scientific knowledge are not taken in order to fulfit personal malafide intentions.
As said above that science is boon as well as bane , a good use of scientific knowledge will certainly advantageous but if the such an activity is undertaken to reach malafide goals it will be very treacherous for all of us. Therefore the government has to place restrictions on the scientific research and development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
...f the purpose is malafide or science as a knowledge is misused to get a personal advantage ...
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Suggestion: I
...development is broached in this prompt.I mostly agree to the prompt as I believe...
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Suggestion: For
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...and it can be traced and stopped only if such checks are placed. More restriction...
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Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: For
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...will be very treacherous for all of us. Therefore the government has to place restriction...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 12.4196629213 217% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2626.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05973025048 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13061521171 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.391136801541 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 830.7 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.480565042 60.3974514979 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.833333333 118.986275619 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.25 23.4991977007 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195347043519 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102244357897 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716907387386 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132203876174 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490395190627 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 14.1392134831 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 48.8420337079 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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