Governments should place few if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Research and development is a developing process and it is essential in various ways. The standards and methods of living can be more sophisticated by developing new technologies. The prompt recommends that for the organizations performing scientific research government must impose some restrictions for them. In my opinion, I partially agree with this recommendation due to following reasons.
To begin, scientific research is done to discover various things which will be useful to us. It helps us to lead a better life day by day. As a part of experiments, it may be necessary to use various materials which may be not eco-friendly. This may lead to polluting environment by releasing harmful gases. In such cases, it is necessary for the government to protect health and lives of people. It may impose restrictions like using those gases to a minimum level and in a place far from the cities and villages.
Further, if the deleterious materials are used in any research, then they must be stored and protected in a secured place. If these materials are used by normal people, it may lead to disaster. For example, in nuclear reactions uranium element is used in reactors for fission processes. They multiply adequatelyin a short span. If this material is used by normal people there may chances of fire accidents. These are such cases where government must put on some mandatory restrictions to secure harmful materials in a confined place.
And also the procedures and data used for any invention is to be kept in secured place. If there is data breach, then the procedures can be leaked. this leads to duplicity of invention and may not get the required credit for our development. In such cases, government must keep provide restricted security to protect the inventions.
However, if the inventions are done using harmful materials and processes, it will destroy environment and harmful to living organisms. Hence, in such type of cases also nation can impose restrictions to use environment friendly materials like renewable sources for research. It will also help in reducing global warming and doesn't effect human and wildlife.
However, there are some cases where some researchers can't be done without harmful procedures. Such researches must be done with precautionary measures. Hence, it is important for government to impose restrictions on research labs for people 's health and also enivormental friendly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'reactions'' or 'reaction's'?
Suggestion: reactions'; reaction's
...d to disaster. For example, in nuclear reactions uranium element is used in reactors for...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hey multiply adequatelyin a short span. If this material is used by normal people ...
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Line 8, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ach, then the procedures can be leaked. this leads to duplicity of invention and may...
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Line 11, column 326, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...lso help in reducing global warming and doesnt effect human and wildlife. However, ...
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Line 13, column 54, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e are some cases where some researchers cant be done without harmful procedures. Suc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, then, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21882951654 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02106248884 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478371501272 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6703523094 60.3974514979 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8846153846 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1153846154 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57692307692 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164718912941 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513270793674 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048193126055 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101336388755 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640790327048 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.