To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Different societies have various traditions and cultures. we can learn the importance of them in various ways. To understand the importance of society, we must know all of its categories. The prompt recommends that to know the importance of societies, we must study major cities of them. In my opinion, I partially agree with this suggestion to know major cities of the society to know their cultures and traditions.
To begin, there are many societies and each one of them varies in one or the other thing. Understanding its values, principles can be done through studying the important parts of the respective society. In the major cities, the population is more compared to the minor cities. And most probably, in a society, the major cities are a bit more developed compared to others. So,many people come from various cities, towns, villages to do work, businesses, etc. As the people in the major cities are from various parts , we can know the particular cultures , traditions of all the people living over there. Studying them covers wide range of characteristics .
Further, even though we get a lot of knowledge from major cities itself, we should not ignore some of the cities which are not major. we must not restrict ourselves to the important and most populated cities. The importance of society not only lies in the different people's traditions ,cultures, but also in the important places, monuments of the society. There may be famous sculptures in less populated cities but it may be most tourist spot, means one of the milestones for that society. If we confine ourselves to major ones, we may not miss some of the valuable information.
For a society, there may be water bodies, ancient temples, various traditions, different lifestyles. even though it is a minor city, due to all the availabilities people of their culture or lifestyle may not move to major city which results in lack of knowledge of them .So, we may not get the essence and importance of the society only through studying it's major cities.
Of course, some contradict that there may be societies in which only major cities are developed and we can know most if it from them. But, it may not be the same to all societies where people may live both in major and minor parts of society. However, to know the importance of a society, one must study its major cities and also important small cities to fully gain knowledge of them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85507246377 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68718492071 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403381642512 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.916583547 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3636363636 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.59090909091 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432222583332 0.243740707755 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141946822427 0.0831039109588 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971442961095 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283715902005 0.150359130593 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644308096595 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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