The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are the only tools of human minds Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take I

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The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are the only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Since human beings evolved from single-celled organisms, humans have been creating and building things from weapons to machines, from huts to towers, etc. As the human mind expands to innovations the machines they create become smarter every day. However, I agree with the prompt stating that machines can never supersede the human mind and are merely the tools to reduce humanreduce the human effort for 3 reasons.

To begin, humans have the power to create machines and also destroy them. Machines themselves have no value whatsoever. It’s the commands or software that gives machines a task to do for humans. For instance, a smart car cannot drive itself anywhere it wants, it cannot think on its own, when a human provides a destination in the smart car then it maps the location and drives towards it. Thus, machines cannot think independently which the human mind does and so machine intelligence can never overpower the human mind.

Further, the human mind has a logical side and a creative side. The creative mind can bring a variety of solutions and creative techniques to any given problem. Machines are incapable of creativity, their logical mind can bring them solutions but it would be very predictable for humans. On the other hand, humans are manipulative and thus they are capable of getting what they want without any strenuous effort using machines as tools. For example, when a picture is presented, the machine will only understand with logic and reasoning and see what is present in the picture but a human mind will be able to predict and build a story out of it. No doubt machines are becoming smarter than humans but the creativity of the human mind will find a way to beat them anytime.

Finally, machines can understand any problem that is programmed into them and find a logical solution to it. However, humans have one very important feature - emotions. Emotions in human beings help them make better decisions. For instance, a human can understand the complex emotions of individuals and give them better advice than a computer that is unable to detect and provide solutions to emotionally damaged individuals. Such examples prove that the human mind is way better at understanding emotions and making better decisions than machines.

Hence, although machines are helpful, heavily intelligent, and quick in their actions, they are still a tool for humans to decrease their workload so that humans can do more important tasks at hand. The human mind is way more complex - filled with logic, creativity, and emotions which makes them superior to machines anytime.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 773, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, so, still, then, thus, as to, for example, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05813953488 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60385183282 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493023255814 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8494331602 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4761904762 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327426241586 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118414905811 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721610054645 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209789136376 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525269121676 0.0667264976115 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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