The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of
human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with
the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or
might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The contemporary society is governed with two tools: human mind and computers. Albeit, machines seems to have upper-hand in this governance as it is faster than human minds, computes complex calculations, and perform tasks that seems impossible for the mind to do. However, these machines’ requires large amount of electricity to operate. Its operation is also linear; it only works on the set algorithm. Hence, the human mind will always be superior to machines in all facets.
To begin with, machines have restricted path of operation. These computers, which are built majorly on algorithms, are not designed to perform diversely like human minds. In fact, it is virtually impossible to design machines that can function assortedly and freely like human minds. Also, this diversity has helped ameliorate computers as these computers are now developed to perform many functions. With this diversity of human mind, the computer would remain quaint.
However, some well-learned individuals might cavil that machines, which uses linear algorithm, performs faster than human minds. They might even contend that further that these machines, because of their high celerity, are able to perform complex task than human minds. These are true to some extent. But we need to consider the memory use of these tools. While human memory has been set to wittingly and unwittingly record things experienced by the owner, the computer only stores whatever the owner wants. This complexity of human memory makes hard for the mind to easily recall information like the computer odes.
To add to this, the human mind requires few watts of electricity to operate while the computer requires googol of watts to function. This high need of power, which contribute to global deterioration, is a major disadvantage of computer. The mind on the hand only performs basic and recondite tasks on on just about 15 watts, which makes the mind superior to machines.
In conclusion, people erroneously believe that the computer performs more operations than human minds. While this might seem to be true, it is extremely wrong. The human mind performs diversely, requires little electricity, and has the ability to perform freely. All these qualities are what the computers lack.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: on
...only performs basic and recondite tasks on on just about 15 watts, which makes the mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30362116992 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67397864186 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523676880223 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3274986439 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7826086957 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6086956522 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52173913043 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241171644652 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810402922063 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673008181111 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155639891944 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592000644268 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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