If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.

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If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.

Goals give us direction. A larger task is often broken up into shorter ones, each having specific goals, so that we are not lost midway. Goals must be well defined, realistic and time-bound – otherwise it doesn’t make any sense. Once a goal is established, there may be multiple ways to achieve it. The achievers evaluate each option mostly based on criteria such as arduousness of the journey, cost and effort involved. But there are other criteria that must also be taken into consideration when deciding the road ahead.

Before deciding a path to reach the target, we need to evaluate if it abides the law the land. There may be much faster way to establish a business and earn success by bribing some government official, but should one do it? If caught, the entire path will lead us behind the bars.

Then there are moral or ethical angle. Taking the same example of establishing or running a business, one should not engage into unethical activities just to sideline a prominent competitor, or to deprive the employees from what they deserve, say money or number of hours of rest.

And finally, there may be ways that are too dangerous. One may be brave enough to take risk, but all risks are not to be taken.

Looking at these angle, it’s not agreeable to think that any means can be taken to achieve a goal, however worthy it is.

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Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'angles'?
Suggestion: angles
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 238.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73109243697 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51528762674 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659663865546 0.4932671777 134% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.394631658 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4285714286 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138399812683 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487517773494 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609843564339 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779963806171 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760386875969 0.0667264976115 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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